What’s the process for ordering an MBA Application Package?

Here’s how the MBA Application Packages work: First you will fill out a questionnaire. Then your MBA admissions consultant will interview you and ask you about your personal background, academic interests and strengths, extracurricular activities, hobbies and interests, community service, goals, and reasons for applying to B-School X – basically anything that could be used in your MBA application essays. Together you and your adviser will decide which experiences best present a multi-dimensional, compelling portrait of YOU.

After becoming acquainted with you during this brainstorming session, which typically takes one to two hours, you and your adviser will discuss a theme for each of your essays and then your adviser will send you an outline for the essays based on your previous discussions. The outlines will help you focus on your most powerful experiences by providing you with structure and direction. Consisting of bullet points, it will give you the guidance you need to present the most relevant and compelling elements of your story. The outline will help you put that story down on paper with minimal blank-screen-itis and maximal impact.

After you write your personal statement, you will send it to your adviser, who will edit it for grammar, spelling, style, and word usage – the nitty-gritty details of writing. S/he will return the edited copy to you within two business days of receiving it. Typically clients request two to four reviews of an essay before they are satisfied with it.

How detailed are your outlines? Are they euphemisms for essay drafts?

Let’s start with the last question first. The outline is not a euphemism for an essay or an essay draft.

The outline consists of bullet points and sentence fragments. Its job: provide you with the structure and direction necessary for you to start writing. It provides guidance, but is not a straightjacket. The essay is at all times your essay.

Will you write the essays for me?


Can I use the MBA Application Package if I do not live near one of your advisers?

No problem. We have clients throughout the world, and thanks to e-mail and the telephone, we can communicate with you efficiently and effectively.

First we set up a telephone appointment. This appointment is usually lengthy - typically lasting one to two hours. Its purpose is three-fold:

  1. We get to know you, your goals, and your past experiences.
  2. You choose a theme for your essay.
  3. We consult with you regarding an outline for your essay.

If you live outside the U.S.A, we try to minimize your telephone expense by asking for background information via e-mail and reserving the telephone for topics where a dialogue is really necessary. We have found that the time differences pose minor problems, and we have worked with people literally from around the world – from Kazakhstan to Cameroon, Argentina to India.

After you receive your outline, you write the personal statement on your own, but if you have any questions you can call or e-mail us. When finished writing, you e-mail the draft to your editor; then she edits it and returns the edited version to you. Subsequent essay drafts are transmitted via e-mail.

How long does one MBA Application Package take?

It typically takes two to three weeks for the first application; subsequent ones are faster. Also motivated clients have finished a school package in less than seven, but that is unusual.

Please keep in mind that quick completion heavily depends on you promptly returning drafts to your adviser.

If I want to use packages for more than one school, will I have to purchase the Initial Grad School Essay Package for each school?

You can purchase multiple MBA Application Packages at a lower rate than buying one package and then another. For example, a 2-Application Package only costs about one-third more than a 1-Application Package. Furthermore, third and later packages can cost less than a third of the initial application package.

Even if you choose to buy one application package to start and then add application packages one by one, later application packages are significantly less expensive than the first one.

Finally, you can start with an application package for the first school and then switch to hourly services for later schools if you feel you will be better off. We try to be flexible, because we recognize that different clients have different needs and budgets.

What’s the process for ordering MBA Essay Review & Editing?

With’s MBA Essay Review & Editing, you will submit your essay drafts to your adviser who will critique them on a content level. Although we don’t interview you, we do request a recent résumé. As s/he reviews your essays, your adviser will ask the following questions: Do you have a clear theme, a logical structure, an engaging opening, and a conclusion that ties up the essay? Did you answer the essay questions? Have you revealed something distinctive and interesting about yourself? Have you made effective use of specifics to distinguish yourself from your competition, support your main points, and add interest to your essay? If you submit multiple essays for one school, your adviser will also check that the essays complement each other. After reviewing your essay, your adviser will then provide you with feedback and suggestions for improvement, and then you will revise the essay. 

After you revise your essay, you will again send it to your adviser who will now focus on clarity, style, grammar, spelling, and word usage – the nit-picky details of writing. S/he then returns the edited copy to you within two business days of receiving it. Typically clients request two reviews of an essay before they are satisfied with it, but some want more and that’s fine.

What’s your turnaround time?

Two business-days for each round of editing. Interviews are by appointment.

When do you recommend the MBA Application Package and when do you recommend MBA Essay Review & Editing?

If you really aren’t sure how to approach the essays, lack confidence in your ability to write well, or want to save time more than money, we recommend the MBA Application Packages

If you know what you want to write (or already have drafts), have confidence in your writing ability, and want to save money more than time, then we recommendMBA Essay Review & Editing.

Can I use the MBA Application Packages for some essays and Hourly Review & Editing for others?

Yes. You can mix and match, or you can use the MBA Application Package for one or two schools and MBA Essay Review & Editing for all subsequent schools. 

Aren’t you expensive?

Not at all. The fees you pay to could be one of the best investments you’ll ever make! Consider the possibility of increased earnings if you attend a more highly ranked school as opposed to the cost of’s one-on-one assistance. "Ah," you say, "but you don’t know if I would be accepted without your help." True. And we cannot guarantee your acceptance. But a brief look at our testimonial page will tell you that many of our clients are convinced they would not be in their top choice schools without’s editorial help. They repeatedly and emphatically state that we are worth the money. 

Do you use a template? Don’t all client essays sound the same?

We don’t use a template at all, nor do we recommend one. We are dedicated to bringing out the individuality and distinctiveness of our clients and strive to make our clients stand out from the crowd by emphasizing distinguishing experiences and details. We are convinced that portraying your uniqueness is the primary task of the essays.

If I have a limited budget and have already written a draft, could you review my draft and advise me whether I need the MBA Application Package or if I can do with MBA Essay Review & Editing instead?

Yes, we would be happy to review your drafts. Your adviser will then tell you whether s/he thinks your draft is a good foundation for continuing with MBA Essay Review & Editing or whether you would benefit from the MBA Application Package. There is no charge for providing this recommendation.

Typically, how many drafts does an adviser review with the MBA Application Package?

Two to four, but there is no additional charge if you want additional reviews.

Can my adviser be my interview coach? If I want my interview coach to be someone other than my adviser, can I do so?

For Interview Coaching, you can go either route. Some clients prefer someone new so that the mock interview will better simulate the real thing. Others prefer to work with the adviser who knows them best. It’s up to you.

What’s the process for a MBA Waitlist Letter Package?

If you are a new client and you have purchased a MBA Waitlist Letter Package, then your adviser will read your application and interview you briefly about your activities since you submitted your application. The adviser will also discuss with you your reasons for wanting to attend the school that waitlisted you. S/he will then send you an outline for a waitlist letter.

If you are an existing client, then your adviser will interview you about your activities since you submitted your application and any changes in your reasons for wanting to attend the school that waitlisted you. S/he will then send you an outline for a waitlist letter.

After you write the letter, you will send it to your adviser for editing. S/he will correct it for grammar, spelling, style, word usage, etc. and return it to you.

How do I get started? How is payment handled?

It’s easy. Go to our catalogue and choose the services you need. Click on the 'Buy Now' button next to the services you need and fill out the order form. You will receive an email asking for academic information. Your order will be processed within one business day. Your credit card will be billed immediately.

What is considered "billable time"?

Billable time includes time spent reviewing materials, editing, and consulting with you via any media including but not limited to telephone, Skype, and email. Yes it includes composing the emails. Essentially, we bill for all time spent working for you except when we are advising on which Accepted service to use or responding to billing questions. Your editor will do his or her best to keep you informed of time used throughout the engagement. 

If you are concerned about us racking up the billable hours, please request an estimate up front.

What is your Rush Service? I need faster turnaround! Can you help me?

Our Rush Service is for clients who need faster than two-business-day turnaround. Before commencing work, we will determine if we have availability to meet your deadline and set up a schedule with you. If you purchase rush services and we don't have editors available who can work within your timeframe, we will notify you before we start work. If at that time you no longer want's assistance, we will refund your payment.

Can you charge me rush prices without my approval?

No. Rush prices require the approval of the client, the editor, and management.

What if I am not happy with the service?

We want you to be happy! If you aren’t satisfied with your editor, you can ask to switch editors. If you want a refund, please see our refund policy.

What if I want to try you out now and purchase more of your services later?

No problem. When you are ready to authorize additional work, you can either purchase additional services online, or send an e-mail to your editor, who will send you a link so that you can purchase additional time. 

Why should I hire Accepted?

Here is how you will benefit from using Accepted for your grad applications:

  1. Your editor will serve as a sounding board and mentor as you go through the process of applying. You need someone experienced saying that the optional essay does not really add value to your application. You will benefit from someone saying that you need to clarify the connection between your internship and your goals. You will have an advantage if someone knowledgeable tells you that you are focusing too much on a negative and not enough on your achievements, or perhaps suggests that Experience A is more impressive than Experience B, or reveals how you can weave both into the application. To read what our clients say about our services, please visit ourTestimonial Page.
  2. You will have a professional, seasoned editor making sure that you present yourself articulately and correctly. One of’s strengths is the professionalism and experience of its staff. You certainly do not want writing errors. To judge our editors’ qualifications, please visit About Us. All staff bios are listed there.
  3. Using can save you time. Grad applicants frequently go through multiple drafts, a lot of nail-biting, tearing up of the multiple drafts, rewriting, hearing contradictory advice, rewriting again. You will greatly reduce the amount of time you spend on your essays by choosing


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