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We bet you're thinking, "Well they sound good, but what do their clients say?" Do they think Accepted.com's editors improved their essays and their chances of acceptance?

Accepted.com's clients are talking about the unique services provided by our editing and consulting team! To read more about Accepted.com's experienced professional editors, please select from the links below. We encourage you to share your thoughts and always welcome your comments!

Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, When I wrote yesterday it was regarding issues with essays [due tomorrow] but you went ahead and edited all of them the minute I sent them and solved all issues.... I finished checking all the essays and they are great so I think we will not need to talk tonight unless something totally unexpected comes up. Thanks again for doing so rapidly yesterday!


Judy Gruen
Thank you! Could not have done it without you. You were really great! --Accepted to Wharton Lauder


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Thank you! Could not have done it without you. You were really great! --Accepted to Wharton Lauder


Cindy Tokumitsu
Got the call from INSEAD today, will be joining the France campus. I cannot describe in words how grateful am I for your support, help and guidance through the application procedure. This would not have been possible without you and thanks a lot for bearing with me!


Todd King
Wow - this is great!! I am so happy with the final form of my MIT essays! :) Thanks to you, I *might* just have a real shot at getting in now!


Linda Abraham
I have decided to accept the Stanford [MsX] offer and will be joining the class of 2015. It has been a pleasure working with Jen and it wouldn't have been possible without her help. I will indeed let my friends know about Accepted.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Hi Natalie, I wanted to take a moment and thank you for helping me out this year. With an extremely low GMAT, below average GPA and degree from a low ranked university, I am extremely blessed to be attending a top business school. This shows that with hard work and an amazing support cast like you, ANYTHING is possible in this world. My admission would not have happened without your guidance. I hired you as a consultant in January not knowing that you will also turn out to be a doctor and an angel. I will always be grateful for everything you have done for me this year. I know I asked you million questions over the past 10 months, some intelligent, but mostly silly and you were always gracious in providing a valuable answer. Please let me know if can be of any help. If you have any future clients who wants to connect with a Duke MBA, please send them my way. Please keep in touch!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Hi Cindy, I cannot wait to share with you the good news that I got admitted by NYU Stern Langnoe MBA program! Thank you A LOT for all your help, guidelines, effort and contributes to my application! You were always patient to answer all my questions, even 5 minutes before my interview. And you always provided me the answers or feedback quickly and sufficiently. You even contributed a lot of your night time and weekend time to match my schedule. I really appreciated all your work and please also pass my thanks to Linda and whoever worked on my case. I would like also to present my sincere thanks and best wishes to your family since you spent a lot of your personal time with me, especially nights and weekend when you are supposed to enjoy the peaceful moments with your lovely family! Thanks again for all your help! -- Accepted to NYU Langone


Jennifer Weld
I would not have put together strong essays without your help, guidance and patience. Your commitment, approach and enthusiasm were top notch. You took an immense effort to extract all relevant and important information and the essays reflect all those and I am truly excited and grateful. I am 100% sure I would not have received the same kind of exceptional service from any other provider. You are the best.


Jennifer Weld
After putting a great deal of thought into how I wished to steer my career, I submitted my application to a top school. I was very confident, and therefore shocked when I was denied. Soon after I sought a consultant and was introduced to Jen. In the first conversation you will realize you are in safe hands with someone who will work diligently to get you into your school of choice. Talent, scores and experience alone will not get you into your dream school. There is something else that many candidates miss, something that Jen can help pull out of you, allowing you to put your best foot forward. However grim your application situation might be, if Jen is involved, be sure you are in the hands of a professional who will patiently bring out the best in you.             -Accepted to two Top 10 EMBA programs


Tanis Kmetyk
I really do appreciate all your amazing support and it definitely wouldn't have been possible without your guidance... I would be more than happy to give my highest recommendation for u as an amazing coach and a friend. Thanks once again for all the invaluable guidance all along the process :) --Admitted to INSEAD.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Rahul: Thanks to Accepted.com for guiding me on my Statement of Purpose. This really helped me thinking in the right direction. I will definitely recommend it to my friends. Accepted to IE EMBA


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Hi Linda, I wanted to update you on my business school plans. I was just accepted to Northwestern off the wait list and I will be going to Kellogg in the fall. I am so excited about Kellogg and I am so thrilled to have this opportunity. I wanted you to know that there is no way I could have accomplished this without Natalie's help. She has been a source of constant guidance and encouragement for me throughout this process. Natalie has believed in me and my potential from the beginning and she has been incredibly patient with me. When I started this process, I was essentially clueless and with Natalie's help I have gained so much knowledge, not only about business but also about myself. I am so proud of how much I have grown in the past year and I know Natalie has played a huge role in my development. I think Accepted.com is incredibly fortunate to have Natalie on its staff. There is no doubt how much insight Natalie has into the admissions process, but what has impressed me the most is what a wonderful person she is. I look forward to keeping in contact with Natalie throughout my time at Kellogg and again, it has been a pleasure working with her. Best regards,


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer. I wanted to let you know that I received offers from IMD and INSEAD! and I chose INSEAD in the end. I wanted to thank you for all of your helpful comments on my essays. They really helped me address the questions and focus on what's really being asked.


Jennifer Bloom
Thanks, Jennifer. I couldn't have done it without Accepted! [Accepted to UCLA]


Todd King
I am writing this email to express my appreciation to the consulting work you have provided me for my MBA application. Without your help, I would not have been accepted by Tuck, or even by Fisher or Smeal. One thing you may not know is that shortly before I hired you, I hired another consultant from another company. Therefore, I have the opportunity to compare the work of two consultants from two different companies. Three weeks into my application, I noticed the great difference of you two. Even though he had the great opportunity to keep me working with him, since he was the first consultant I hired and his company is a very active company on Chasedream.com. ... Your working style gave me a relaxed mood to think creatively and allowed me to freely ask whatever questions that came to me. You showed great patience in explaining your ideas and answered my questions. This helped a lot since I can’t express myself efficiently in English.... Therefore, I was more creative when I worked with you. My ability to summarize is weak even in Chinese, not to mention in English. It’s you who helped me to condense the information to meet the school’s word limit. You showed me great ways to summarize information, and told me how to sift out irrelevant information. During the course we worked together, you not only helped me with successful application, but also taught me a lot of useful ways to summarize information for my future study and work. This will benefit me in my future life... your response was always very quick. As I can remember, I could almost always expect to get your feedback and reply to my emails within one day without exception for weekend, even though your company’s official response time was two business days. Your efficient working style saved my time, energy, and money... During my whole application, I felt you were always there 24 x 7 to help me. I felt you were standing by me to support me with your best effort, and we had a common goal – to successfully get admission to each school I applied. However, the other consultant I hired made me feel like he was a sales person waiting for opportunities to earn money from me. We had different goals: my goal was to successfully get admission to the school I applied, while his goal was to earn money from me. You made me feel assured. Whenever I needed help, I know you were there to back me up. All in all, during my application, you were like a big brother and I was like a baby who was staggering to learn how to walk. You held my hand, led my way, and taught me how to walk each step. At the end, I could walk very well.


Judy Gruen
I have received an admit from the EWMBA program at Berkeley Haas. It feels great to accomplish this goal; I couldn’t have achieved it without your help, guidance and personal attention to my campaign. Thank you for everything, and tell your current prospects they are in good hands!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I wanted to thank you for the great help that Accepted.com gave me. Judy and Natalie did a great job. They pushed me beyond my comfort zone and many times I felt frustrated because expressing myself in English - my second language - at that level is not easy. But I was very happy with the final version of my essays and when my interview came, I was ready and confident. Thanks again, and keep up with the great service.


Jennifer Weld
Working with Jen gives one an appreciation for how your application is likely to be perceived and appreciated by the admissions officers. One tends to be a little isolated and focused narrowly on themselves when putting their thoughts onto paper. Jen has the ability to bring in her experience in the admissions environment and provide the context in which your essay will be absorbed and offers difference-making insight that you might otherwise not receive on your own. – Accepted to Chicago Booth EMBA


Jennifer Weld
I have no suggestions for improvement, other than I wish I knew you existed sooner!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I have received an admit from the EWMBA program at Berkeley Haas. It feels great to accomplish this goal; I couldn’t have achieved it without your help, guidance and personal attention to my campaign. Thank you for everything, and tell your current prospects they are in good hands!


Jennifer Bloom
I called her and said, "Jennifer, I just got an admit from HBS - big thanks to you!"; she paused and replied: "wow, congratulations! you deserve it." I couldn't thank Jennifer more on the one of the most important days of my life! Jennifer was not only an admission consultant to me, but more of an adviser, a mentor, and a friend! She is a highly responsive consultant with fast turnaround times. She is one who would always give you her frank advice whether you like it or not - and somehow her advice tends to be right! Her thought clarity and understanding of your position & candidacy will automatically command your respect. At the beginning of our engagement, I was always apprehensive of the effectiveness of a remote interaction, but all through the period we worked on my application - the coordination was unexpectedly smooth and comfortable. Jennifer was quite accommodating of my busy work schedule and was often flexible to adjust timing of our calls. Whenever, my application effort dipped due to busy work schedule - Jennifer was also quick to give a nudge and made sure we kept up with the timelines. Last but not the least, I found her quite open to feedback and receptive to suggestions. This helped a great deal in ensuring we had a candid discussion on the application package. Anybody who is looking at admission consulting, I highly recommend you to work with Jennifer! (From an Indian IT guy)


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, I got admitted to LBS!!! Thank you very much for your support - you helped me to massively improve my essays. – Also accepted to St. Gallen


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, I am very excited to share the great news with you that I'm accepted at Stanford GSB!! Thank you so much for your tremendous help in my application process! Your comments are so constructive and effective, which I really appreciated!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I take this opportunity to thank Accepted.com for placing [my wife and me] under the guidance of Cindy. She has been phenomenal throughout the process. We sincerely appreciate Cindy's diligence, flexibility and commitment to our application. Additionally, I want to commend Cindy for her patience as she guided us in a very professional manner. We will surely recommend your group to any prospective MBA/EMBA student.


Todd King
Words cannot describe how talented Todd is at this. I was honestly blown away. He was able to get me to write about how I truly felt with the questions he asked and the way he probed. As much as I tried to pull this out - answers to why this experience was most meaningful for me, what I learned - while working with my other consultants, I just couldn't. As a result, the draft I had was far from where I wanted it to be. But he was able to do this and I found that to be very special. Essay editing and guidance is one thing, but to have the ability to pull out your subconscious - the thoughts jammed way in the back of your head, those "true" learnings, is an exceptional skill.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
"I'm very excited to attend Wharton on a fellowship and couldn't have done it without Natalie and Accepted's guidance!"


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I GOT INTO WHARTON!!!!!! Thank you Natalie!! I could not have done it without your precious help! I received a nice fellowship too :) :) Also accepted to Columbia , Booth, and LBS.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I'm really excited to be going to Stanford. You probably hear this a lot, but Natalie was really helpful! In all the interviews I had, there wasn't a single question that I wasn't ready for. I owe a large part of my success to her. - Accepted to Stanford, Kellogg, Haas, Anderson, Fuqua and Ross


Todd King
Todd was instrumental in my success. He was super quick with his feedback and responses and would call it like he saw it. I was initially apprehensive of the investment but it was worth every penny and then some. -Accepted to CMU Tepper


Jennifer Weld
We haven't spoken in a while, but I am bringing you great news. I got in at UNC and Tepper! I would like to thank you for all the effort you put in to help me with my applications, I do not know if I could make it to this point without your help, you were exceptional. Thank you so much for everything, I wish I could explain how happy I am right now.


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, I wanted to pass on the exciting news I received earlier this morning. What seemed impossible months ago with my GMAT struggles became reality today. I received an email from the CEIBS admission office notifying me of my acceptance into its MBA program for the next class intake. It also comes with an unexpected surprise...I was offered a merit scholarship! I really thought that if I was accepted, I would just scrape by with my sub par GMAT score. This would definitely not have been made possible without your help throughout the application process. All the way from encouraging me to take the GMAT the 4th and final time to the last steps of the process in helping me prepare for the interview. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your efforts and devotion in guiding me to put together the best application I could. It's really a dream come true to finally be given the chance to launch my career in China. I still can't believe it!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Chief, Thank you so much for all of your help! I could never have done this without your guidance. And, thank you for believing in me, it really has meant a lot to me. –Accepted to Michigan Ross


Cindy Tokumitsu
Everything was perfect and I received a note for an interview within a week. Cindy was great!


Jennifer Weld
Thanks Jennifer, I am so grateful to all your help and suggestions. I have a list of people to thank for their support and help and you definitely top that chart.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Hi Natalie, I received a positive decision from USC as well with a half tuition waiver for both the years. I don't think I could have received this offer without your help. With this positive decision, it is now two out of two with $$$. Could not ask for more! –Also accepted to UCLA Anderson


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jeniffer. I would like to thank you for all the help and guidance. Without your help, I probably wouldn't have made it. We managed to cover 3 apps in approx. 25-26 days [:)]


Jennifer Weld
I really just wanted to stress how happy I am and how much I appreciate all your advice and assistance in getting me to this place. It really, really meant a lot to have your support and I want you to know that I will be forever grateful. --Accepted to Notre Dame Mendoza


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you so much for helping me with my Wharton application. Without your support, I wouldn't have even started working on my application! Your insights and comments really pushed me.


Jennifer Weld
Thank you so very much for all your help - you are truly awesome. Your editing and guidance were exceptional. I am very pleased with my essays, they truly showcased my strengths!


Judy Gruen
I am glad to give Accepted.com feedback on their service. Let me start off by saying that I am an extremely pleased and satisfied customer. This is my second time working with Accepted.com, and I did not even consider approaching any other MBA admissions consulting service the second time. Though I haven't got into the targeted schools yet, I am confident my application will be received very well by the Admissions Committee.


Todd King
Hi Todd, I would like to share with you the great news - I've been admitted to Duke Fuqua! Thank you for your help … your brilliant ideas and suggestions really inspired me to present a multidimensional aspect of myself. Thank you Todd, you are a great consultant! I would be happy to refer you to my friends in case they need help!


Jennifer Weld
I think these are great and so is your work. It was a great investment to make. Thank you.


Judy Gruen
I wanted to thank you for the great help that Accepted.com gave me. Judy and Natalie did a great job. They pushed me beyond my comfort zone and many times I felt frustrated because expressing myself in English - my second language - at that level is not easy. But I was very happy with the final version of my essays and when my interview came, I was ready and confident. Thanks again, and keep up with the great service.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thank you very much for your reactivity and professionalism. Thank you for challenging me.


Tanis Kmetyk
Anyway, I was accepted by Trium! ...I am very happy and I would like to thank you a lot for this! You were great! Thank you again for helping me and making this dream possible! I am going to start it in September.


Todd King
Hi Todd, Earlier this evening, I submitted my HBS application & all my recommenders are in. So I'm officially a R1 applicant. I'm writing to thank you for all of your help and guidance through the process. As a re-applicant, I was very nervous about starting the process again largely for fear of simply not having new material to write about. You gave me the confidence to proceed and, with your help, I feel great about my submission and candidacy (and I should - I was waitlisted last year!). So hopefully I'll be calling you soon to share the good news that I've been invited to interview. At which time I look forward to working with you on interview prep too. Until then, thanks again for all of your assistance, it is greatly appreciated.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I will be applying in the next hour!! Thank you Natalie. I would be very lost without you.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Dear Cindy! I have good news -- I got into IMD! I was quite surprised since they gave me an earlier notice!!!! YAY! THANK YOU! One of the IMD professor actually told me that he really liked all my essays and was impressed. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! :-)


Todd King
I would certainly recommend your services with the highest confidence. I would also like to recognize R. Todd King's assistance with my application. He is certainly a Subject Matter Expert. His professionalism and enthusiasm for his work were clearly evident. Please pass my compliments on to your company leadership. -- Accepted to MIT Sloan EMBA


Jennifer Bloom
Thank You for your support and assistance! - Admitted to Johnson Class of 2014 :)


Judy Gruen
I just received my admission to Santa Clara University MBA this morning!! Thank you so much for helping put my essays together to showcase my best abilities. Thank you for being so patient with me throughout the entire writing process. I couldn't have this application done if you weren't on the other side of the phone line/ Internet my every little step! I'll definitely spread the word on your services and accepted.com.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
When I first started to applying for my MBA, I struggled deciding if I wanted to invest the money into a consultant. The process was already very expensive. However, I concluded that getting into a top program would have such a dramatic effect on my career, I would take the chance and invest the extra money. I can confidently state that working with Natalie Epstein was the best decision I made during the entire application process. I spoke with several different consulting companies before choosing Accepted.com. The conversations I had with the other companies seemed very impersonal and sales driven. However, Natalie took the time to really understand my background, why I wanted to pursue my MBA and my motivations for applying to different schools. Even after I purchased Accepted.com’s consulting package, Natalie continued with her very personal style and responded to my calls and emails quickly and thoughtfully. Natalie not only helped me to craft concise, meaningful stories from my background, but also was instrumental in helping me to prioritize schools based on my individual needs. Natalie truly embodied every positive connotation of the word consultant. Her advice and her ability to help me articulate my story, cater to my strengths and drill meticulously for my interviews were crucial. When I received my acceptance call from my top choice of programs, Natalie was one of the first people I called to share the news with. I wholeheartedly recommend Natalie and Accepted.com to anyone applying for their graduate degree. She is both a wonderful consultant and a wonderful person. –Accepted to Chicago Booth.


Jennifer Bloom
I am accepted at INSEAD which is on the top of my list, and am looking forward to the MBA journey this coming September. I appreciate the help from you, Ms. Jennifer Bloom and accepted.com. I worked with Jennifer who is a fine editor and provide very useful and insightful reviews on my application essays.


Jennifer Weld
I was looking for admission guidance from someone who would not only understand my strengths and weaknesses but also understand what a business school is looking for. I have no doubt in my mind that Jen’s inputs absolutely helped me crystallize my thoughts and helped me showcase my true potential to the admissions committee. Thanks Jen! It was a real pleasure working with you. –Accepted to Cornell Johnson EMBA


Jennifer Weld
I would like to thank you for your excellent service.....for helping me to get to this new chapter of my life! --Accepted to Emory, York, and the University of Toronto


Robbie Walker
I have accepted the admission to Chicago Booth as it has been my first choice since beginning. Robbie Walker has been of a great help all through, with my essays and as well as the mock interview. Thanks to accepted.com for all the help.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, With joy I wish to inform you that I have been accepted ... to study MBA in Finance and Accounting. The credit of this success goes to you for your unflinching support during the essay writing. Words cannot convey exactly my deep heartfelt gratitude for your assistance but all can simply say is God bless you rich. Please convey my gratitude to Linda, the director of Accepted.com. Accepted.com is really helping a lot of prospective MBA seekers.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I worked with other editors before, and I really think Cindy’s experience and thorough thinking helped me to dig my materials to a further level. As for turnaround – I would give her 15 out of 10! With her experience and deeply digging into all the materials, she was able to help me not just writing the essay, but it’s like a journey exploring myself with her guidance. She was able to pin point out the most crucial factors and helped me to present them. It’s fantastic working with Cindy – it’s like working with a friend that cares and is willing to help you. I would greatly recommend Accepted.com and also Cindy. 10 for Cindy.


Judy Gruen
I was very pleased to know of my acceptance into the MBA program at Florida International University. The guidance of Judy Gruen in helping me with my SOP was phenomenal. A big Thanks to everyone at Accepted.com for helping me put my MBA application over the top!


Todd King
[Todd’s] inputs were very critical in turning my essays into effective messages… I really liked the "cut the crap in your essays" directness, especially with a ticking clock. The interactions were laser-focused on refining the content and getting done with the process. (Accepted to UC Berkeley Haas)


Jennifer Bloom
I want to say a big thank you for your edits. It was very high quality work and I appreciate your quick replies. I and my friends worked with some of your competitors and I have to say that in terms of essay editing you are much better.


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you Jennifer. I will be joining Top B-School X. It's among the top schools in US and there's a strong personal reason as well. Me and [anonymous] (you reviewed his essays too) are getting married this June and will be joining together. :)


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis: Great news! I got into LBS! Still feels like a dream.Thank you so much for all your support.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I'm writing to share with you the good news: I'm accepted to HBS. I'd like to say millions of "thank yous" to you. I talked to my interviewer this morning, and she said I made a very good interview. Without your help, I wouldn't be able to make such a good one. What's more important is that I enjoyed working with you every time. You made me feel like a friend to you. Thank you Natalie!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Additional update on my side. I received admission to Kellogg one year program yesterday. :) Many, many thanks for your support. Without your support, I could not have presented my personal and professional achievements in such a good light.


Todd King
I will interview at MIT MBA program. Actually I am working with Todd King. He has contributed a lot along the application process, and I am very happy working with him.


Todd King
I am delighted to inform you that I got admitted to Haas! This is the Eve & Weekend program, and I will be starting the course in Fall. Thank you very much for the massive help in conveying a strong message through my essays. I will be applying those lessons in all my formal writings in the future.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I'm beyond thrilled with the news I got today! I can't believe that I not only got into Tuck, but also received a scholarship! This is literally the best news I could have hoped for. – Also accepted to Darden, Ross, Anderson, and Yale.


Jennifer Weld
I have been accepted and will start my course in April. Thanks for your input and advice on my essays and CV which were a massive help.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I really am indebted to Cindy for all her help, support and guidance through my application process. I will definitely recommend Accepted.com to my friends and will keep you posted on my final decisions. -- Accepted to Duke


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, I've paid my deposit to Kellogg so as of this morning, it is official! I can't thank you enough for all the advice, guidance, and feedback you've provided throughout the process. True to your promise, you helped me clarify my thoughts, sort out my ideas, and ultimately coaxed out my own voice instead of trying to impose anything on me. Thank you for everything.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Hi Cindy, I am pleased to let you know that I was admitted to Columbia's EMBA program. I'd like to thank you for all your help on the essays as well as your valuable advice on the interview. I truly appreciate it!!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
…now I'm happily letting your know that I got good news from both Columbia and Wharton, the only two schools I applied in round 1. … the admission director of Wharton called me Tuesday night and told me that I was admitted to Wharton! I also got Columbia ED admission a month ago. I am so excited!!! I want to thank you for your great help to my essays, and the interview prep with you has been really helpful! Thank you so much!!!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Thanks a lot for your coaching, editing and help on my MBA application. I appreciate [very] much your effort, your kindness, your over-night work, your professionalism. I have been admitted by Columbia J-term program, and will head for NYC by the end of this year to start my new journey. Hope we can catch up one day in NYC.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, this is really really good, thank you so much for your involvement!! It is great!! Again with this essay, it's great!!! Thanks a lot. ... Jennifer, very good news, I have been accepted!! Thank you very much for your help. - Accepted to MIT Sloan


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I got into Darden today. Woo hoo! – Accepted previous week to Yale SOM


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Thank you very much for recommending Natalie to me. She has always been very helpful. Although she is my only consultant, which makes it difficult to compare with others, I do believe she is the best! Her professionalism, expertise and efficiency [are] really impressive. She builds up my success, and you know how important this is for a student at the life changing crossroad. --Accepted to INSEAD


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, I got the offer from LBS… Thank you very much for your help!!! This would have not been possible without your support…


Cindy Tokumitsu
Hi Cindy,I just heard from Columbia and I got admitted into their EMBA program. Thank you very much for your help. I would not have done this without your help. Thanks a lot!


Todd King
I've heard that I'm admitted to Duke in this morning!...Had it not been for your excellent help, I might not have been admitted to Fuqua.


Todd King
The advice and editing of Todd was really helpful. I believe he is an excellent editor. – Accepted to Duke Fuqua


Todd King
I am delighted to inform you that I got admitted to Haas! This is the Eve & Weekend program, and I will be starting the course in Fall. Thank you very much for the massive help in conveying a strong message through my essays. I will be applying those lessons in all my formal writings in the future.


Linda Abraham
Linda is terrific. With her help I got into HBS, Stanford, and Wharton! I can’t thank her enough. She really brought out the best in me.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Thanks Cindy for the quick reply. One update here is that I got admitted to MIT MBA and the essays are revised by you! thanks a lot!!!!!! =) now i may need your help on one essay to apply for the scholarship and I will finish it during the weekend for your comments and review.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I believe [acceptance at Chicago Booth is] a great achievement! And btw I would like to share this success with Cindy - thanks to her precious inputs my application has improved to the point that I've been invited for interviews at NYU, Columbia and Chicago (i.e., the 3 B-schools I applied to)!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy helped me to get into CBS! Her understanding of the school, strategic planning on my essays and editing were all superb, not to mention her dedication and passion in achieving the very best. I would not have achieved this without her help.


Eliot Sloan
Attached is the latest version of the essay.Thank you for your patience and strong guidance.


Eliot Sloan
Eliot Sloan is terrific. It was a pleasure to work with her. Her speedy responses, thorough analysis, and expert opinions both added a ton of value to my essay and allowed me to finish it well before my deadline. If I need any further assistance during my application process, I will definitely request her again. I hope you have a way to recognize her as a terrific member of your staff.


Todd King
I'm satisfied with your excellent editing again. Your critical and effective comments and editing were really helpful. I'll surely let you know when I hear happy news from Duke. I also want to complete my MIT 1st round essay work with you.


Jennifer Bloom
Your comments were very insightful. I think my essays look in much better shape now thanks to your input. Many many thanks." [Accepted to INSEAD]


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer. Wanted to update you that I got into INSEAD. Would like to thank you for all your help and inputs. Really appreciate it.


Jennifer Bloom
The new version looks great. I understand that a lot of work has gone into this, and it shows. It has been a wonderful experience interacting with you. I will definitely recommend your guidance to anyone seeking professional help on their resumes.


Tanis Kmetyk
I just wanted to let you know the good news: I am admitted at Columbia! I'm so happy! Just got the great news. Well, I know it's thanks to your precious help, so thank you again for everything!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Thanks Cindy for the quick reply. One update here is that I got admitted to MIT MBA and the essays are revised by you! thanks a lot!!!!!! =) now i may need your help on one essay to apply for the scholarship and I will finish it during the weekend for your comments and review.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I believe [acceptance at Chicago Booth is] a great achievement! And btw I would like to share this success with Cindy - thanks to her precious inputs my application has improved to the point that I''ve been invited for interviews at NYU, Columbia and Chicago (i.e., the 3 B-schools I applied to)!


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, I think I may sound like the damsel in distress in dumb movies, but you truly are a hero! Your changes were really great.


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis: Wanted to drop you a note and let you know, I heard back from INSEAD. I'm IN!! Thanks again for all your help!! It was really invaluable.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I again want to thank you for the hard work with me. As I mentioned I worked with two other people in this process and you were without a doubt the most helpful. I felt your strategy, analysis, and insight were the best. Again I just wanted to say thank you! –Accepted to UT McCombs and NYU Stern


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I'd like to let you know that I really appreciated Natalie and Accepted's help and cooperation with my applications - the comments and advice that I received were invaluable. --Accepted to Stanford and Yale SOM


Cindy Tokumitsu
Applying to business school is such a harrowing process. Thank you for everything you've done to make that easier. Your site, in addition to Cindy, was an invaluable resource. – Accepted to Ross


Jennifer Bloom
I deeply thank Jennifer [for her] help and advice throughout the application process. Jennifer is a professional editor and MBA advisor! --Accepted to LBS


Robbie Walker
Robbie has been an amazing editor to work with and I am glad that I chose Accepted for the entire application process. --Accepted to UCLA Anderson and USC Marshall.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I got in!! I just wanted to share the wonderful news with you and thank you very much for helping me prepare and practice for the interview! Thanks again for your help :) I can't believe it!! --Accepted to USC Marshall


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie!!! Thanks for all the unending support, and for crossing fingers toes and thumbs! I made it to Oxford!! I finally made it!!! I couldn't have possibly done it without your guidance. Thank you so much! This was the prize I was hoping for!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
[Natalie] gave me constructive criticism whenever my direction in my essays was wrong. She also provided supportive advice which was very helpful in finding the right direction to present myself in the best possible light.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I got into Wharton!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THE INTERVIEW PREP!!!!!!  IT HELPED INCREDIBLY!!!!!!!!!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Great news: I also got accepted at Stanford GSB and Kellogg and withdrew applications from other schools. I'll be attending Stanford this fall!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie was instrumental in helping me formulate, mold, and present my stories in a polished and cohesive way. She also helped me negotiate and achieve 80% increase in scholarship offer which further enhanced the return on investment for Accepted's services. I would be delighted to recommend Accepted's services, especially Natalie's. She was an invaluable resource to me in my business school applications. Although I could have probably produced good essays on my own with feedback from friends, I could not have developed them to the degree and quality that Natalie helped me achieve. I am extremely thankful to have worked with someone as insightful and wonderful as Natalie. She seems to also truly care about her clients and recognizes the importance of these applications to her clients during this critical junction of their lives. On a side note, I am also very appreciative of Cindy Tokumitsu's help with my interview prep. Natalie had an emergency to attend to and recommended Cindy to help me. I greatly appreciated Cindy stepping in last minute to fit me into her schedule and assist me in my interview prep.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Accepted.com is such a great program and Cindy is brilliant! I will be sure to recommend your services to any of my friends considering grad school. --Accepted to MIT Sloan


Judy Gruen
Dear Judy, I just wanted to reach out and thank you so much for your assistance with my business school essays. I am very happy to report that I was accepted to all four schools (Michigan, Columbia, Duke and Harvard). I also received a partial scholarship from Michigan and a full scholarship from Duke. I am in the process of choosing between Duke and Harvard and intend to visit both schools before I make my decision. Your help with the essays made a huge difference, both in the quality of my essays and the confidence that you instilled in my writing abilities. I am so grateful.


Robbie Walker
Robbie's overall critiques of my essays were extremely helpful. She was able to help me focus my thoughts and ideas into cohesive bodies of work. Her input from a business-level gave me a better perspective on what b-schools are looking for in admission essays. Robbie's criticisms were straightforward and made sense after reading them. She always supported each with a suggestion or an example on my next course of action. Also, she did a great job of helping me incorporate my strengths with weak points. I've had nothing but excellent service with Accepted, from first speaking to Linda to Robbie's prompt and timely turnaround.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I don't even know how I would begin to express my appreciation to you for my Ross application process. This morning, I finally received an acceptance letter from the school. Without your help and dedication, I couldn't achieve this. From now on, I won't hesitate [to] recommend you to whoever [considers] pursuing an MBA.


Cindy Tokumitsu
[Cindy] was best in pointing out subtle things I did wrong on the overall application (not just the long essays). For example, explanation of gaps between jobs, and how to approach the "what have you done to learn about our program" essay. Reading apps is so subjective, so it was good to have an honest opinion of *little* things that could have rubbed the adcom the wrong way. –From a client who had his rejected application evaluated.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I am writing to tell you that I was admitted to the Masters Program in Management Science and Engineering at Stanford! Thank you so much for helping me out with the SOP. I couldn't have made it this far without your help.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie was incredibly helpful, and her assistance played a big part in the decision to accept my admission offer and go back to school. I am grateful for having had the opportunity to work with her. Accepted's service is one of the best investments I can remember making, and I would strongly recommend it to anyone I know who is considering business school. – Accepted to Haas.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, You must have crossed your fingers well :) I have got a piece of news for you. I received the admission call this afternoon. So I am IN! Awesome! You have done wonders from day 1 and it would not have been possible without your editing, guidance and support, considering we worked on the essays and LORs over roughly 6 weeks! –Accepted to INSEAD


Judy Gruen
To be honest, I was very skeptical of spending that amount of money for essay feedback. But I must really thank Accepted.com and particularly Judy for being such a thorough professional. With my last minute drafts, I must have been very difficult to work with. But Judy showed utmost patience and provided really honest feedback which helped me present my story in the best way possible. – Accepted to Tuck


Tanis Kmetyk
I would like to let you know that I was accepted by Chicago Booth. Tanis' essay review comments were excellent and certainly did their part to help me succeed!


Jennifer Bloom
Dear Jennifer, This is to say a big thank you to you for your invaluable inputs, support and patience with me over the past few weeks/months. I never would have made it this far without your help and I can safely say my applications wouldn't have been half as good as they are now. I cannot thank you enough. [Accepted to Wharton]


Jennifer Bloom
And I must say, from Day 1, I am quite pleased with Jennifer's prompt response and constructive criticism.   Jennifer has made me look at my stories from another perspective, and I think the good stories have turned out to be better than I expected. I will definitely refer Accepted to my friends. However, I must mention that Accepted's rates are very high, especially for people residing in India to afford this wonderful service. Nevertheless, I have already recommended Accepted to few of my friends who are targeting 2012 admissions season.


Judy Gruen
I thought Judy was amazing. She was responsive and extremely helpful. I found her high level comments insightful and on point. I think it would have been helpful to brainstorm more with her before we started editing but in general, I was extremely satisfied.


Jennifer Bloom
I must say, from Day 1, I am quite pleased with Jennifer's prompt response and constructive criticism. Jennifer has made me look at my stories from another perspective and I think the good stories have turned out to be better than I expected. I will definitely refer Accepted to my friends. However, i must mention that Accepted's rates are very high especially for people residing in India to afford this wonderful service. Nevertheless, I have already recommended Accepted to few of my friends who are targeting 2012 admissions season.


Jennifer Bloom
I have been accepted by McDonough School at Georgetown University and what is more have been given a very nice scholarship. I would like to thank you again for your guidance and advice through the entire process.


Judy Gruen
Thank you for taking the time to work with me and give me exceptional guidance as I apply to graduate school. I know that applying to graduate school takes a great deal of time, energy, and effort, and I appreciate your support throughout this process. I will keep you updated about my progress in applying to the Consortium. Thank you for sharing in the process as I couldn’t have done it without you.


Judy Gruen
Judy Gruen has been working with me since December 29. She did an incredible job. Completely outstanding. Absolutely, my chances increased a lot after her revisions. I am very satisfied with her attendance and reviews. Thanks for all accepted.com support -Accepted to Michigan Ross


Cindy Tokumitsu
Wanted to shoot you some good news on the business school front - I got accepted to both Wharton and Kellogg first round. I wanted to give you a huge thanks for the last year. You always provided helpful feedback, even on the most tight timelines. Really, really appreciate everything.


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis was excellent. Not only did she have an excellent knowledge & awareness of what the school were seeking, but she also matched my own skill set to the school's requirements for me, so that I showed my best side. I'd certainly recommend Tanis to any of my friends. -Accepted to London Business School


Jennifer Bloom
I must thank you and Accepted for the great work and support. My application was so much better because of it! –Accepted to Wharton.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Accepted has been great and Natalie is amazing. She is extremely knowledgeable and helps me to think about things from an entirely different viewpoint, which leads to me being able to present myself in the best way possible. I couldn't have asked for a better person to work with. Her performance all-around was great. I would definitely recommend her to others.


Jennifer Weld
The changes you made are quite helpful, and make the language a lot simpler and clearer. Thank you for making so much out of the hour, I very much appreciate that and will recommend you to anyone who is looking for review services. It was a pleasure working with you!


Jennifer Bloom
In working with Jennifer Bloom, I found myself to be extremely lucky because she was able to help me identify the appropriate schools regarding culture and fit, as well as, recognize my achievements that enabled me to present myself as a worthy applicant. From the moment I began working with Jennifer, I found myself to be in extremely capable and knowledgeable hands. Identifying the appropriate school based on my background and career goals and helping me to articulate myself in essays, Jennifer is the key to my being accepted into The Wharton School's MBA program. At the beginning of the process, The Wharton School was not on my short list of schools. However, my conversations with Jennifer served to inform me that my background and personality were actually the right fit for the school. In writing my essays, Jennifer was integral to helping my find my true voice in articulating myself. I can honestly say that I would not have had the opportunity to attend The Wharton School's MBA program had it not been for working with Jennifer Bloom at Accepted.com. If you are reading this to evaluate the caliber of her services, I would like to say that working with Jennifer Bloom is a decision that you will not regret and will only change your life for the better.


Tanis Kmetyk

I am very satisfied by the quality of Tanis' edits and comments, her punctuality and communication style. I would without a doubt recommend her to friends (actually I already have).

The service is highly satisfactory: Tanis was able to provide very high-quality editing input as well as giving me ideas on positioning and emphasizing messages throughout my essays, taking into account different schools' specificities.

Tanis' facility with words is impressive (as is her ability to cut them). I hadn't thought a significant improvement in terms of style was possible in my essays before Tanis had a go at them. She proved me wrong.

Tanis presents her suggestions in an objective, impassionate manner, which I think is the correct approach. MBA applicants should be able to put their egos aside and receive some sincere feedback, be it positive or negative. Tanis provides just that.

I believe Tanis achieved a good balance between giving high-quality feedback in terms of editing and general commenting in the time allowed. If there was anything I would have liked her to do differently, I would have asked her, but I can't think of anything.



Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, I am in at CBS - J-term 2011! I just recieved the decision letter today. Thanks again for the fantastic job.


Tanis Kmetyk
Her strong command of the language and her flow ensures a thorough review and refinement of the essays language / grammar etc. At the same time, she ensures not to change the style of the essay which is a great strength of hers. While she fixed the grammar significantly, I felt my voice in the essays was maintained. She did not change the vocabulary much which is important to keep my language and style in all of the essays.


Jennifer Weld
Jen, thanks a lot. I know I've been a tough client to work with -- but I appreciate you hanging in there and helping me get to the finish line. Of course, as soon as I hear from the school -- good or bad -- I will let you know. Thanks again for everything. I couldn't have done without you.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I look forward to the opportunity to vouch for you to your prospective clients next year. You've be an invaluable help Natalie, thank you!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
It has been a great experience working with Natalie. Her professional and "to the point" feedback helped me profoundly refine my essays. Natalie's comments always encouraged and ignited new thoughts and enabled me to prepare my best possible application. I will certainly recommend Accepted.com and Natalie to every applicant.


Jennifer Bloom
Just thought I'd let you know that I ended up getting accepted to IMD. Just wanted you to know that I wouldn't have made it here without your help.


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, I've been accepted by Kellogg:) Thank you so much for your great support and help with my application!


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks Tanis :) Thanks for all the help. You've been of tremendous support not only in editing those essays, but in general in showing me how to get messages across in a more succinct and creative way.


Tanis Kmetyk
Done and dusted with HBS application, I want to thank you for your support and efforts in making enormous improvements to my application in such quick time. At least I am confident with my application. Whether I end up in HBS or not, I have actually picked up a lot on my written communication style that's going to help me in my career.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, I would like to thank you for your great support, cooperation, and needless to mention your efforts, during the last few months. I have successfully pressed the button yesterday and am looking forward to the interview invitation.


Jennifer Bloom
Dear Linda, I just wanted to reach out and thank you for the experience of working with Accepted. I have worked with Jennifer Bloom over the past couple of months and she has truly been a magnificent support throughout this rather crazy application process. Jennifer's commitment to my application surpassed my expectations. What really touched a chord was her patience in walking me through every decision/ the input she gave. I am thankful to her and irrespective of the result, I am certain my application was much much better as a result of her help. Thank you.


Tanis Kmetyk
Just to let you know, I have been offered a place in the next MBA at the London Business School. The London Dubai EMBA told me there were still strongly interested in my application. I now have to decide what to do... I am sure that I am in such a comfortable situation thanks to your help…


Cindy Tokumitsu
Just wanted to let you know that my application for Fall 2010 Langone has been accepted by Stern. Just received email confirmation and await an official letter confirming the same. I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude and thanks for all your help and assistance during the process.


Tanis Kmetyk
I got into insead! Unbelievable!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I want to let you know that it was a fabulous experience working with Natalie over the past one year. She helped me last November with my application to Columbia and in March of this year with my application to IMD. I truly feel that working with Natalie gave me an advantage over many other applicants and without her in my corner I don’t think I would have been admitted to IMD. She served as an excellent sounding board for ideas about how to best position myself in the essays. I always felt like I was working with a close friend through my essays and application. She provided a fresh assessment of my drafts and never failed to suggest areas of improvements that were caught by her trained, to say the least, eye! Natalie not only helped my complete my essays in short notice but also went out of her way to help me with my interview prep for IMD. After speaking with her for almost an hour over the phone, I felt very comfortable and prepared for the challenging IMD interview day. Natalie, Thank you once again for everything.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I want to inform you that I have been admitted to IMD! I got the call 24 hours after my interview from the director of admissions, informing me that I was outstanding on the interview day and that they did not have to think too much about admitting me. I am really excited and want to thank you for all your help! I really appreciate all your time and effort and am glad that all the hard work has finally paid off.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie was a great help for me. Not only did she do a great job with the essays, but she was a huge help in focusing my career goals. There was a night and day difference between my applications this year and last year. -Accepted to Ross


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie is great, and she gave me a lot insight into the admission's process and MBA program. I only wish I knew her before I even started my application process. I would recommend her to my friends in the future. –Accepted to Cornell Johnson


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie was very professional from the beginning to the end. Her advice was invaluable and was essential in positioning myself for both my essay writing and interview process. She was always available when I had questions and she was my mental support during this very exhausting MBA application process. Knowing that I have someone who is as experienced as [she is] to give me advice made a significant difference, which eventually led to my successful admission t Chicago Booth. Natalie's editing was excellent! She points out the obvious gaps in terms of the logic of my statements in my essays. After properly addressing her comments, my essays were significantly improved. Without her comments, my essays would lack the strength and impact that I intended them to have. I believe Accepted.com and Natalie have truly made a difference and contributed significantly to my ultimate success of going to the school that I wanted and realizing my dreams. I would definitely recommend Accepted.com to my friends and colleagues.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I got my MIT admit letter!!! Thanks so much for your help, Natalie. It was a pleasure working with you. I'm looking forward to the next phase of my life. WOOHOOO!!!!


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, Thanks a lot for believing! The way I see it is that (with your help), I have put everything on my side to give it a good shot. Whether it works out or not, I won't have any regrets. No matter the outcome, I will actually come out of this experience stronger. You have helped me put order in my messy head/mind. I had ideas, thoughts, accomplishments, experiences, which I never looked back on and you have helped me put order in the house. Keep in touch.


Jennifer Bloom
I'm delighted to inform you that I've been accepted at MIT Sloan. I am quite happy. Thanks a lot for the effort you put into my application.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer Bloom was an outstanding editor, both in terms of content and style. She vastly strengthened the quality of my essays. -Accepted to HBS and Kellogg


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer's support was absolutely fantastic, the most professional compared to other similar offerings. As soon as my brother applies he will contact her, too.


Jennifer Bloom
I just hit send! Many thanks for all your help! The writing process has actually been very interesting and I think I have even learned about me! I never could have done it without your help in such a tight period of time. Thanks again. -Accepted to Haas


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie, I was just informed that I got accepted to my top MBA school! Thank you so much for all your help with my application. Your assistance was invaluable! I am glad I used your services during my admissions process.


Judy Gruen
I have been accepted to John Marshall, Loyola, Chicago-Kent, Fordham, University of Cincinnati, and Georgetown. I also was offered a $20,000 scholarship to Loyola, a full scholarship and $10,000 stipend to John Marshall, a $10,000 scholarship to Cincinnati, and a full scholarship to Chicago-Kent. I really do not think I would have gotten all these offers if it was not for your help. Thank you so much for everything.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Thank you very much for all your hard work!!! I know you played a very important role in my acceptances!! –Accepted to MIT Sloan, London Business School, and Chicago


Cindy Tokumitsu
I would like to thank you for the tremendous support and service you have provided me. You may not know, but I had talked with close to 10 admission services and their consultants before taking the service. Your clarity of approach and experience convinced me that you will be the one to help me out and after talking with you I had no doubts that you are the person I have been seeking to assist me. Needless to say, without you I would not have accomplished my goal, I am damn sure about it. You made me work and brainstorm and understand my strengths, weakness, accomplishments more than I did before. I am more of a last-minute person and working with me you made things happen-- that would really mean how quick and responsive you are. Overall I am happy I took the right service and the right person in fact :). So I would recommend for those who are starting from step 1 to research other services out there, Accepted.com is the best that offers services at the right price. Obviously it has the perfect fleet of consultants like Cindy who can really drive you towards your goal!!! –Accepted to USC and Broad


Cindy Tokumitsu
I was accepted at Chicago Booth! It was a pleasure working with you. The editing and advice you've provided are definitely a key factor in securing the offer. Moreover, the questions you posed were extremely helpful in clarifying my thoughts on my personal story and my goals.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie is absolutely one of the very best people I have ever had the chance to get to know. I was blown away by how she sincerely cared about me through this challenging process. She was truly a godsend. Natalie helped me get acceptances to MIT Sloan, Kellogg, Tuck, and UCLA. Stop looking for a consultant, and consider yourself lucky if she has the availability to take you on as one of her clients! Thank you so much Natalie!


Tanis Kmetyk
Honestly speaking, Tanis has been extremely supportive, efficient and insightful during the whole process. By the way, I also just received also an email from HBS: IN again! The choice will be a difficult one... -Accepted to HBS, Wharton and LBS


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, Yes another huge thank you. I got accepted into HBS yesterday. Thanks for your great advice, encouragement, and brilliant editing style – Once again, I doubt I would have got accepted without you. P.S. Thanks again, you are a real legend. -Accepted to HBS and Kellogg


Robbie Walker
It's hard to overestimate Robbie's contribution to the quality of my application! Robbie let me look at my candidacy and my anecdotes in a new way, helped to present and organize my initial drafts so that they made good stories, interesting and understandable for other people. And, what was even more valuable, she was a permanent source of advice and support throughout the whole application process. It was one of the most professional consultations that I've ever obtained. To cut the long story short, if you are still hesitating, just stop it, write to Robbie and start working towards your dream! –Accepted to Harvard and Chicago Booth


Robbie Walker
I really want to thank you for all the help during the application process. Your input was really helpful. I believe your advice and insight really helped me to strengthen my essays and round up all the materials to really show what was strong about my candidacy. It was a real pleasure working with you! -Accepted to Chicago Booth and NYU Stern


Cydney Foote
Hi Cydney, Great news!! I got admissions from UCLA and Georgetown! Wow! I really appreciate all your help and advice. Your [guidance] was so helpful and I'll definitely tell my friends whoever seek MBA how you can lead them to the right place.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
When I received the interview invite from Michigan, I knew I had to brush up my interview skills. That's when I contacted Accepted.com and they couldn't have paired me up with a more knowledgeable person. Natalie coached me patiently through the interview process and provided me with really valuable insights into the admissions process. The result of this coaching - a stellar interview and the admit call from Ross! Thank you Natalie and Accepted.com.


Jennifer Bloom
I'm delighted to inform [you] I've been accepted at MIT Sloan, my top choice. Thanks a lot for the excellent service and effort you put into my application. By telling me about the errors in my application, by responding quickly to correct these flaws, and by giving me great advice on how to improve the application, you helped me finish a great application in the short time we had. -Admitted to MIT, LBS, and Chicago


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Nat! I just got the call! OMG! I'm in!!! Yeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaa! Thank you for all your hard work and patience! We made it! – Accepted to Chicago


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, I got admit from Univ of Cambridge - Judge Business School. Many thanks for helping me submit a compelling application.


Jennifer Bloom
I heard from Tepper recently and they have offered me an admit. I just wanted to let you know about it and thank you for your valuable inputs with the mock interview.


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, Thank you very much for your great support! I see a significant improvement to the first version I have sent you, and I believe these essays will have a positive effect to my overall application. Thanks again.


Linda Abraham
It was very pleasant to feel your support and interest throughout the application process. Working with you, Robbie, and Natalie was a great, very positive and productive experience for me. Thank you very much! I wish you a lot of good customers, everlasting success, and prosperity! I'm sure that Accepted.com really deserves this! -- Accepted to Chicago and Harvard with fellowships to both.


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, hope you're well. Just thought you might like to know that after Chicago Booth, I've been accepted at Rice, so thanks again for your help! Your essays must have made a big difference here because they offered me a great scholarship too!


Tanis Kmetyk
Just had a quick read through all the HBS essays. I think they are all good to go. There is no duplication and we've used every possible opportunity to convey the messages/stories that had to be told. Very pleased... Thanks a lot for some amazing editing and word cutting (an art in itself to be honest)!!! You've been extremely helpful, patient, professional, creative and above all supportive throughout the whole process. Thanks a zillion.


Michelle Stockman
I would highly recommend Michelle Stockman as her feedback was insightful and helpful.


Tanis Kmetyk
"Wow Wow... Wow! I'm out of breath... Amazing is an understatement... "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie did an absolutely fantastic job and is a great addition to your company. And even though I purchased a relatively small package, she treated me with the utmost respect and gave me her full attention. I was accepted into Duke with [less-than-average experience and a low GPA], and I wholeheartedly believe I couldn't of done so without her help.


Robbie Walker
"Gosh, I'm so grateful to have someone like Robbie give me tremendous guidance and support. She's been such an ally. She's not only helped me showcase myself succinctly in my essays, but she's also brought focus to my personal strengths and successes, and given me confidence. She helped me realize my ability to compete for a spot at a top 10 school. Yesterday's news was a direct result of her support. I was also very pleased with the number of resources available on the website: the chats, Interview database and reference booklet, and anything else one would need. I'm SO excited about the next phase of my life and I can't thank you all enough for helping me get there! I would definitely recommend your company to anyone else who's considering grad school or anyone who just needs a great sounding board about their career progression! ;) –Accepted at Ross "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I used Natalie almost exclusively for macro level guidance. Her insight and experience was invaluable. She presented thoughts well, helped me expand on my own ideas, and craft a stronger story.


Tanis Kmetyk
I couldn't have done it without the help from Tanis. She was absolutely brilliant. -- Accepted to Oxford Said


Jennifer Bloom
This process has been long and exhausting, but I can tell you for sure that this success is only partially mine - the credit for one half of this success belongs to Jennifer, who has been amazing throughout the process, and used her extraordinary abilities to make my dream come true. What an amazing asset she is for your company! –Accepted at Chicago


Tanis Kmetyk
I just thought I’d let you know that I’ve been accepted onto the MBA at Said Business School! – many, many thanks for your help with my applications – its a real relief to finally have an offer.


Tanis Kmetyk
"You are like un marchand de reves (a machine that makes dream come true)! Thanks a lot. I'm sure we'll soon be in touch re: HBS. Until then, bon courage and may the force be with you. "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie is a gift from the admission Gods to the very mortal applicant! I can't imagine having to do this without her guidance.


Tanis Kmetyk
"Great news! I was just accepted into Chicago, my first choice school! Thank you so much for your invaluable support over the last couple of months. With your help, I was able to present myself in a much stronger light and the hard work has certainly paid off. Thanks again, and have a great Christmas. "


Cindy Tokumitsu
"I do not have enough words to thank Cindy. She is exceptional. She is the best in her field. She has exceeded my expectations. I would recommend her and Accepted.com to everyone I know. "


Tanis Kmetyk
Just a quick note to let you know I got admitted to Chicago today, so no more backup apps necessary. Thanks for all your help - your interview prep obviously made the difference!


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Thanks Natalie! I was actually thinking of emailing you to ask your waitlist advice, but then I got the Stanford call from Derrick Bolton! It was surreal. I'm ecstatic! I think Stanford is ultimately the best fit for me. It was always my #1, but seemed like the hardest to get into! I'm so happy. Thanks again for your help. Now, I'm just looking forward to finally going to business school!


Tanis Kmetyk
Thank you so, so much one again - you're amazing! - you've really given my [London Business School] essays a polished sharp feel.


Jennifer Bloom
"Hi Jennifer, I was crunched with work but the result is: I GOT INTO HBS!!! I am very, very excited and thank you very much for all your help during the application process. My boyfriend is applying next year so we will be in touch in a few months. Merry Xmas and Happy New Year! "


Michelle Stockman
"Hi Michelle, How's it going? So it looks like I was a week early on becoming nervous about my application status. I received the letter today and it read: Congratulations!...The AdCom has accepted your ED app to CBS! Phew! I just want to again thank you for all your help! There is no way I could have done it without you, and a double thanks on the Essay Tips/Construction. I have already used your comments to approach other essays I've been writing, and it's made the process much easier and added a lot more confidence to my writing. Awesome, keep up the good work, and I guess you can at least add one more to the list of 40 or so successful applicants on your resume, haha. Thanks again and Happy Holidays! Now I am definitely STOKED! ~Accepted at Columbia "


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, I really appreciate all your great help and support. This not only comes to helping me with the essays or the mock interview, but it is about the great feeling, support and confidence that I get from you, which really makes the difference! Yesterday, I told my wife how lucky I was that I listened to my heart and switched from another company, because there is no chance in the world that I would have found anyone else half as good and committed as you are...Plus, I really feel that you got to know me and I really enjoy our communication.


Jennifer Bloom
"Hi Jennifer, Just writing this email to express my profound gratitude for all your feedback and help in composing my essays. They were indeed extremely helpful. Working with you has been completely hassle free and enriching experience, not to forget the timelines. Great Job! "


Robbie Walker
Robbie was a great "fresh set of eyes" in my essay writing process. I am very satisfied with the service that I received. The timeliness of the feedback was incredibly helpful, and Robbie's personal interest in my application exceeded my expectations.


Tanis Kmetyk
I want to thank you for your help as I was admitted to the NYU Masters program!!! I still can't believe it, I think your impact on my personal statement was amazing! I really appreciate your help.


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I am so impressed with her. I know I could never have written the caliber of essay I submitted without her expert guidance.


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Thanks so much for your help -you have been great! It's been fun... I started this exercise not really enjoying writing and talking about myself. Over the weeks, I have come to enjoy the mornings I spent reviewing your edits and writing updates to the drafts. I never knew I had so much in me. Thanks so much for helping me discover my inner voice.


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Dear Natalie, Chicago Booth called me this afternoon, to inform me I have been accepted, just three days after my interview. Thank you, thank you so much! :)


Michelle Stockman
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Rebecca Blustein
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Tanis Kmetyk
I have been accepted! Yaaayyy!!! Thank you so much for your guidance and invaluable help in the process. I owe you both huge bottles of champagne and flowers!!!!! You are the best!
[Accepted to INSEAD]


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
I just wanted to let you know that I have been officially accepted to the 2+2 program. I can't thank you enough for all the help you have given me over these past few months. You really have been invaluable in this process, and instrumental in my acceptance.


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It has been a very pleasant experience to work with Tanis on my MBA application. I could immediately tap her extensive experience with B School candidates across the globe. The cooperation did not only help me to greatly improve the quality of my application package, but her coaching also guided me in critical moments of the process. Remember, you have only one shot at your school of choice. I am now part the MBA class of 2011 at London Business School'.


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Cindy Tokumitsu
I have been accepted! Yaaayyy!!! Thank you so much for your guidance and invaluable help in the process. I owe you both huge bottles of champagne and flowers!!!!! You are the best!
[Accepted to INSEAD]


Cydney Foote
Cyd is a gem! I think this is her triumph also. Had to let her know.--Accepted to Chicago Booth


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, Hope all is well. I just heard back from LBS and I was accepted to the program. I would like to thank you for all your help and guidance through the process. I believe your input sculpted my essays from a collection of ideas and events to a coherent and compelling story. Once again thank you for everything.


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Judy Gruen
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Judy Gruen
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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Cindy Tokumitsu
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Jennifer Bloom
"This series of correspondence from a client highlights his satisfaction throughout the application process: I have no work experiences in big brand name companies like McKinsey, IBM, or Citibank, but you greatly edited my essays, shining my past achievements. I thank you very much for your work and extra time. I really appreciate it.....I received interview invitation from Ross! I think that your essay editing must be the key factor for the interview invitation. I again appreciate your edit....Thanks to practice with you, I feel confident about the interview on Friday. I think my interview will be going well....I got admitted to Ross! They called me this afternoon to let me know the news. Your services were greatly helpful to me and I once again thank your for your work. [Admitted to Michigan Ross]"


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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Cindy Tokumitsu
"Hello Cindy, Hope all is well. I have some very exciting news to share - I have been accepted at Ross!!!! I am very very excited about it. I want to thank you for all your help. I couldn't have done it without you. "


Judy Gruen
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Cindy Tokumitsu
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Jennifer Bloom
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Jennifer Bloom
Got admitted to Ross! Thanks for your amazing support!


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Cindy Tokumitsu
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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Jennifer Bloom
"Hello Jennifer, I would like to thank you very very much for your help in the process. Looking back it seems that all your predictions and strategies were correct (even though I gave a fight every now and then). On top of that, your response time was amazing - which was a huge benefit for me. Please do not hesitate for a minute about referring people to me when they inquire about your services - I'd be honored. Again, thank you for everything, and I'll be sure to consult you again once some cover letters are in need [Accepted to Stanford, MIT, Michigan, and Chicago]. "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
Natalie- I got in! Thank you so so so so MUCH for your help!! You're wonderful! – Accepted to Cornell


Judy Gruen
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Tanis Kmetyk
"Dear Tanis, I have the pleasure to tell you that I have been accepted at INSEAD and at Kellogg! Moreover, Kellogg has awarded me a prestigious scholarship. Thanks a lot for your help and advice for the essays! "


Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
"Tanis, I cannot thank you enough for the help you have given me over the last couple of weeks… and think the essays look fantastic now. Many thanks once again - I can't begin to explain how much your input is helping. "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Cindy Tokumitsu
"Cindy's editing is phenomenal. Many of the essays I submitted in the five hour session were far beyond the word limit and off the point. Cindy trimmed my garrulous writing style to something potent and I am very happy with the essays I submitted. I really like Cindy's approach to criticism. With essays being so integral to a successful application, the clarity and content of them is so important. Very respectful and poised, her queries generally struck at the heart of the essays; at times, I was forced to re-examine and refocus my ambitions and my thoughts. For this alone, she deserves high accolades. Through her efforts, I believe I have presented the best possible ""me"" in what I have written. [Your MBA service] is a little pricy but the phrase ""you get what you pay for"" comes to mind when I think of your service. It is an expense well justified. "


Tanis Kmetyk
Once again, thank you so much for your kind help all this time. Your brilliant editing, inputs, or even small talk to motivate me really meant a lot.


Tanis Kmetyk
Many thanks once again for your help with my LBS essays. I have to admit that on reflection I'm absolutely astonished by how much value you added in just a single hour. I just wish I'd asked for help earlier…


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you for this terrific service that you run. In every aspect of the MBA process Accepted has been tremendously helpful. I'm very happy Jennifer was my editor. because besides being exceptionally good at what she does she is very friendly and polite, yet authoritative. [She is] very strong in articulating key points within [the] word-count. Jennifer got the balance right. --Accepted to London Business School


Cindy Tokumitsu
"I wanted to wish you Merry Christmas. I am overseas, spending the holidays with my family. I got into Chicago and Wharton! Thank you so much! Without your help this would not have been possible. "


Robbie Walker
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Jennifer Bloom
"I am a subscriber of Accepted and am currently dealing with Jennifer Bloom for editing of my MBA essays. I would like to thank Jennifer and Accepted for exemplary service that was offered. I found Jennifer not only fast but also excellent at editing my essays, providing valuable feedback. I have no hesitation to recommend Accepted service to my friends and colleagues. "


Jennifer Bloom
"It was a pleasure working with your company on the administrative level and above all with Jennifer. Wherever I go, I tell prospective students about the great essays we were able to reach and the wonderful direction Jennifer gave me. I really appreciate and cherish her insistency on convincing me to take wiser steps, even when I was stubborn (and I was J). Current MBA students and alumni say that the hardest part in the MBA path is getting in. My guess is that this is also the most important part and a time when you do you first steps in the business education world. I’m sure that I did the best choice when I decided to work with Jennifer. I thank her and your company from the bottom of my heart for the great work and dedication to get the best out of my stories and personality. –Accepted to LBS, Duke, and Tepper "


Robbie Walker
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Jennifer Bloom
"Thanks for the wishes. As I had mentioned to Jennifer before, this wouldn’t have been possible without the tremendous help that she had provided. She was able to bring the best out of me, while ensuring I maintain the personal touch and uniqueness in my essays. I couldn't have been more confident when submitting my applications.I was equally impressed with all the other services that Accepted.com provides. The online chats with the admissions directors and students of the leading business schools had been of great help. –Accepted to Kellogg "


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, Great News!!! I got admitted at Kellogg. I am just exhilarated. I would like to thank you for the tremendous help you provided. This couldn't have been possible without you. I remember when you had reviewed my responses to the initial questionnaire, you said that I needed to show much more impact to be considered at one of the top schools. Even when strategizing for my essays, you have never made me settle for anything [less] than a 'story' with the most impact. Most importantly, your expertise gave me confidence in all my applications - from essays to interviews. It has been great working with you on my applications. I still cannot believe I am admitted to Kellogg - the school that has always been my top choice!!! Many many thanks to you.


Cydney Foote
"I wanted to share the news of my acceptance to Duke's Fuqua School with you. I am excited and nervous at the same time about attending, but in the next few weeks I should have thoughts and next actions sorted out. I wanted to thank you for your help and guidance during this process. As I had stated once in the past, I would be very happy to recommend you to any of my friends and colleagues. "


Jennifer Bloom
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Cydney Foote
Cydney did a great job. Compared to other cheaper services that some of my friends used (they were not happy), this will always be my choice. From what I heard, other services did not provide any feedback or get to know the client, they just edited what you sent them. Cyd helped me create a great and unique story and I'm sure it will pay off. I'll be back soon, my nephew is applying to undergrad and he'll definitely be using this service.


Cydney Foote
I think my essays are much stronger because of Cydney's input. She was fantastic.


Tanis Kmetyk
"Your work in the second version has been fantastic. Not only in the career essay but also in the others, cutting a lot of words in order to adapt to the maximum number of words. Your work has given a lot of value to the essays! I really appreciate your help and work. "


Rebecca Blustein
I just wanted to take this opportunity to thank you for everything. I really enjoyed working with you and am very pleased with how my statement turned out. I dropped my statement in the mail today and hope it will get to the graduate department by Monday. Thanks again and have a nice holiday.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, I really thank you for helping me. Your critiques, advice, and editing are always terrific. And, whenever I needed you, you have been in online at Skype. Even today [in my rushed please trim the essays to meet the] word limits. Thank you...=).


Jennifer Bloom
"Hi Jennifer, Received an admit from ISB. This has been possible due to your continued support and superior editing skills. You pushed me to work harder and give my best. Thanks for your support! You are superb.(Accepted to Indian School of Business) "


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, Thank you for all your help with my [Columbia] SIPA application. I am writing to let you know that I was accepted for fall 2009. I am extremely excited and wanted to express my gratitude to you and your company


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, Just wanted to inform you that I have received nod from ISB for admission into 2009-2010 1-year PGP Programme. All thanks to you!


Jennifer Bloom
"You are tremendously professional and your insights made my application as strong as it can be. I enjoyed working with you and I will be sure to refer my friends to Accepted.com and you."" "


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Cindy Tokumitsu
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Cindy Tokumitsu
"Dear Cindy-This is just to note I've got an email from Columbia this night saying I am accepted. Great news, and many thanks for your help - your input was very specific and target-oriented. "


Cindy Tokumitsu
Without Cindy's insights and edits, my essays would have been quite bland. Her questions made me think and brought out subtle aspects of my personality making my essays compelling. I just submitted my Wharton application. I would recommend Cindy to all my friends.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer is the best editor I have come across. So I would like to thank her and your team for all your efforts.


Robbie Walker
I wanted to thank you for all the assistance you provided during the application process last year. Your contributions were a major reason why I was admitted to Wharton.


Tanis Kmetyk
I think you guys (Accepted & Tanis) are great! I even enjoyed working with you and got an outstanding SOP!


Rebecca Blustein
"I submitted my application to LBS last night. I have learned a lot from this reviewing and editing process. The essays are much more stronger and concrete than before. I don't think I can make my essays better without your help. "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
"I can't even thank you enough for the invaluable expertise you provided. I feel really lucky that I was paired up with you. In the middle while talking to Christina... I almost felt like I was talking to you. I didn't get stuck for even one second during the entire interview. I was able to answer most of the technical questions easily. My experience with you was amazing. My brother did my mock interview today, and said that he couldn't even believe what an incredible improvement there was in just 2 days. My brother is an HBS alumnus. "


Natalie Grinblatt Epstein
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Tanis Kmetyk
I have been accepted to London Business school. I do believe resorting to Accepted.com services was definitely a great help.


Tanis Kmetyk
"I was accepted at Fuqua last year. Tanis helped me greatly in enhancing the points of my essays. "


Tanis Kmetyk
"The help that I got from Tanis really made a difference to my application, and I would definitely recommend Accepted to my friends who need help with their B-School applications. [Accepted at Insead] "


Tanis Kmetyk
I'm pleased to inform [you] that I've decided to work with you to prepare my MBA Applications for Round 1 applications this year since I was very impressed with the experience I had during my Telethon discussion with you.


Tanis Kmetyk
I have reviewed this last edit more than once and I have concluded that this SOP has reached a great level of sharpness and integrity. I am very pleased with what we have accomplished here and appreciate your effort with me. Please rest assured that I will recommend you to anyone who wants to ace an SOP. It has been a great experience working with you. Thank you for a great job well done and thank you for your time and concern.


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, I am delighted to share with you the news of an offer for a place in The Duke MBA Class of 2010. This would not have been possible without the wonderful guidance and support you gave throughout the application and interview process. In fact, all credit goes to you. No words can express my gratitude to you. Thanks a lot for all the amazing ideas you offered to me. I am happy to join Fuqua as it has a great Healthcare faculty.


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, Great news, I have been accepted to both schools (Cranfield and Warwick) for the full-time MBA. Thanks again for helping me getting through the admission process. Both schools are very keen to have me as a student and I guess this is because I was very well prepared.


Tanis Kmetyk
"I'm attending HBS in the fall. I'm very excited! Thank you Tanis for your help! "


Jennifer Bloom
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Tanis Kmetyk
"I got accepted at both INSEAD and LBS, but finally I have decided to go for LBS. By the way, the person that contacted me from INSEAD told me that she really enjoyed reading my essays ;). I wanted to thank you Tanis for all the help you gave me which I think was key in getting into both schools! "


Tanis Kmetyk
"Hi Tanis! I'm so sorry for not keeping you abreast of my b school results. I got accepted to Wharton and HBS, and decided to join HBS this fall. I am eternally indebted for your help and support throughout the process. I guess the 30 iterations of the nine essays got us somewhere. Thank you Tanis, and I hope we remain in touch!"


Jennifer Bloom
"I have accepted the admission offer (I got thru !!!) from HBS and am currently in Boston. Thank you for helping me prepare for the interview. It was really, really helpful. "


Robbie Walker
Robbie was an exceptional help. I doubt if I would have been even interviewed without her expertise and vision on essay content.


Robbie Walker
In an extremely competitive application year and after an unsuccessful attempt the prior year, I gained acceptance into 2 top programs! I owe this to Robbie Walker's editing services. She helped me articulate unique experiences in my background and show personality in my essays. Robbie was such a pleasure to work with; her guidance throughout the application process was invaluable!


Tanis Kmetyk
"Just today got a letter stating that I have been admitted to the Trium programme. Thanks a zillion for all your efforts. "


Cydney Foote
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Jennifer Bloom
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Cindy Tokumitsu
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Cindy Tokumitsu
"Just wanted to let you know that I was accepted to both Chicago GSB and Wharton.I wanted to personally thank you for all your help over the past year - working with you was always a pleasure and I will be sure to recommend you to others who are going through the process next year. "


Jennifer Bloom
"Just wanted to write you a quick note to let you know that I have been admitted to both Oxford and Cornell's MBA programs. I am sure that a large part of it was due to my success on the interviews, and without a doubt your advice played a big part in that success. Thanks again for all of the help! "


Judy Gruen
"Hi Judy, I wanted to share with you the good news that I've been accepted to UCLA! Anyways, I am very grateful for all that you've helped me with, and now the truly difficult task of deciding where to go (Boston vs LA). Thanks for all the time you put into editing my work! "


Robbie Walker
I got in! And with a $15,000 merit scholarship. Yay!! Thank you so much for your help with my essays 1 and 3 (PPT). You definitely helped me feel more confident and prepared for the application process, and your ongoing support has been greatly appreciated. [Accepted to Chicago]


Tanis Kmetyk
"I would like to thank you for your support and advice you gave me. This is an important time in my life as I take the plunge to change careers, and I truly value the advice of professionals like you who know the admission process so well. It was also gratifying to learn that the process has many challenges I need to address. I appreciate the time you spent on me. "


Cindy Tokumitsu
"I've some great news(need I say more?)! I've been admitted to the Chicago GSB for their full-time MBA program starting this Fall. I want to thank you for conducting the mock interview for me. I feel it really helped me get my act together and do well in my actual interview. Thank you once again! "


Tanis Kmetyk
"Hi Tanis, Just to let you know that I have been accepted at Insead executive MBA program. I will start next November! Thank you very much for your help!!! I really appreciated your support. "


Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
"Tanis, I receive the offer from INSEAD. Thanks for your help. "


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis,Thanks. You did a splendid work on the last essay, and others too.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thank you so much. I must say that speaking with you makes me confident. I was already getting frustrated about the process but after talking to you yesterday, I gathered steam again. I appreciate your help.


Tanis Kmetyk
"Tanis, I am delighted to inform you that I have received an admission offer from the Johnson School (Cornell University) for Class of 2010 Full Time MBA Program. I would like to thank you again for all the guidance you provided during the application process. It has been really great working with you. "


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, just a very brief note to say I got a call from the INSEAD admissions office earlier today. Was told that a meeting was held by the commission yesterday, that it was still very early in the cycle but that the admissions officer had enjoyed my application so much that she wanted to ring me straight away to tell me that they wanted to offer me a slot in the 2008 intake! I asked her about the next steps. She told me it was for me to go celebrate :) Not sure it has quite dawned on me yet, but wanted to let you know straight away. Many thanks for your help in the application process - don't think I could have done it without your support and coaching. Thanks again.. and all the best.


Tanis Kmetyk
"I've been just called by LBS. I HAVE BEEN ACCEPTED.....How about that!!!!! Thanks a lot Tanis for your support!!!! I now need to go into a meeting room and jump up and down for a while "


Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
"Hi Tanis, Just to inform you, I GOT IN at MIT. I am extremely happy! "


Tanis Kmetyk
"Hello Tanis! I just received a call from INSEAD, I am IN. And yesterday Wharton invited me to an interview. So far, I am IN at MIT and INSEAD. Thanks! "


Tanis Kmetyk
"Dear Tanis, I want to use this opportunity to thank you for your efforts, commitment and patience during the course of my application to MIT. I think I presented a strong case for acceptance and that was only possible because of your genuine assistance. I am forever indebted to you. Whatever the outcome, you helped me to presented the strongest case I can ever imagine. Moreover, I learned an awful lot from your incisive reviews. Thank you once again. I keep my fingers crossed and hope that I get an interview."


Cindy Tokumitsu
I believe that Cindy's assistance and perspective was integral in securing this acceptance to [MIT Sloan]. She receives my highest recommendation.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, This is a wonderful edit. You have managed to conserve the content and still crop the excess flab. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!


Robbie Walker
I can't thank you enough. Not only were you the best editor, I really felt like I had a supportive friend helping me. I don't think I would have been able to pull off three schools in such a short period of time. I just hope I can return your support with some good news!


Jennifer Bloom
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Robbie Walker
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Tanis Kmetyk
"Tanis-- Just to let you know that I have been accepted at Insead class starting July 08. I know that I could not have made it without your help. So if you need any recommendation, I'm eager to make publicity of your excellent work. Cheers and happy 2008! "


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, I wanted to thank you for the guidance you gave me throughout this process. I really feel that with your help I was able to give a clear portrait of who I am.


Tanis Kmetyk
I very enjoy working with Tanis! In fact, I have three friends who intend to apply for the 09' intake. I will definitely recommend them to work with Tanis as well!! I believe as soon as I show them the quality essays Tanis helped me polish, they will be automatically convinced!


Tanis Kmetyk
I have to thank you for your excellent guidance with my essays and application form! I completed application on Saturday and was shortlisted already on tuesday for an interview :)…


Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
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Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, thank you so much for your guidance. The LBS decision just came in 2 hours ago. I GOT OFFERED AN INTERVIEW! Honestly, I'm over the moon about this, since LBS is my dream school. Once again, none of this would have been possible without you!


Jennifer Bloom
I know several friends who have used your service, on which we have the same comment: You are simply the best. We love and appreciate every single improvement you helped us to achieve. Thank you sincerely


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis' guidance was crucial in getting me accepted [to Columbia Business School]. As I am an international student, who was not familiar with applying to US schools, she has steered me through the process with great care.


Jennifer Bloom
I thank you for the assistance and your understanding during the process since at times my cooperation was lacking. I have actually learned a lot about myself during the application process. I would recommend this service to others since it has been excellent. Your work has been that of a diamond polisher who takes rough stones and converts it in to diamond. I am happy with the essays and they present the best case for my admission to UCLA.


Jennifer Bloom
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Jennifer Bloom
She gave me instructive suggestions and critical comments on my thoughts. That's very helpful! She is a seasoned and diligent expert! She not only edited my essays but also taught me how to correct my errors and present myself logically and clearly with words in essays!


Judy Gruen
Judy, Words can't express how grateful and appreciative I am for your help. Well, at least not words that I know. I'm sure if I put a thank you note together, you would be able to whip it into a state that would properly describe how I feel. Anyway, thank you so much for all of your help. Once I get a little sleep, I am going to rave about you in response to the email evaluation accepted has sent me a couple times now. Also, I would love a chance to take you out to lunch or do something for you if I get in to any of these places. Again, thank you; you are amazing.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Hi Cindy, I just wanted to give you the good news that I got into Stanford as well! I just got the call from Derrick Bolton! I wanted to thank you for your help with the essays - it was invaluable! I am now going to have a tough time deciding between [Harvard & Stanford], but at least it's a nice problem to have!


Michelle Stockman
I just wanted to write you a quick note and give you some feedback on my work with Michelle Stockman over the last month. I consider myself to be a pretty solid writer, but I chose to work with your company on my essays because I think I'm very borderline. Throughout this process, Michelle has provided nothing but insightful comments and very constructive criticism. The fact that my company has a FREE service for employees and I chose to pay Accepted instead is a great testament to the work we have done together.


Robbie Walker
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed working with Robbie. She really helped me demonstrate more confidence and personality through my essays.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, I want to use this opportunity to thank you for your efforts, commitment and patience during the course of my application to MIT. I submitted my application 25 minutes before the deadline. I think I presented a strong case for acceptance and that was only possible because of your genuine assistance. I am forever indebted to you. Whatever the outcome, you helped me to present the strongest case I can ever imagine. Moreover, I learned an awful lot from your incisive reviews. Thank you once again. I keep my fingers crossed and hope that I get an interview.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I found out on Friday that I was also admitted to Duke. I'm looking forward to attending Columbia in the fall! I thoroughly enjoyed working with Cindy on my applications. She spent a lot of time listening to my background, career goals, and thought process, and then helping to guide me to get my applications where they needed to be. I highly recommend her to other candidates.


Jennifer Bloom
Just want to update you on the status of my admission. I'm accepted at Wharton. Thanks again, could not have done it without your help!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Earlier this week, I received an admit to the Ross School of Business at University of Michigan. I truly believe that your help and feedback made a huge difference to the essays and my application. I sincerely appreciate your help and efforts.


Cydney Foote
Thank you so much for your help so far! I've been really successful so far in the admissions process. I have been invited to 17 interviews, accepted at 4 schools, and awarded a full scholarship at one of them.


Jennifer Bloom
I got into Michigan!! All the hard work we did paid off!! Thank you a thousand times!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy- I got into Wharton!! The admission director called me personally to tell me how much she liked my application. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! This is very exciting.


Robbie Walker
Robbie definitely made a huge difference in my application process and supported me the entire way. I am so grateful for Accepted.com and the tremendous help Robbie has been through this arduous application process. –Accepted at Columbia


Judy Gruen
Hi Judy, I got an invitation for an interview from Haas!! Your help definitely helped me get this far.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks for your help for my MBA applications. I have just received my acceptance email from INSEAD and would like to thank you for your help and speedy response. It is very much appreciated. I would definitely recommend your services if I know of anyone who is interested to look for an admissions consultant in future.


Robbie Walker
Thanks so much for your help! I feel that your comments gave my essays the help they needed. I think they are much more concise and powerful than my original versions. I was a little hesitant at first, but am glad I worked with you.


Robbie Walker
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Michelle Stockman
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Jennifer Bloom
Hats off to you for making sense of the second long essay and crafting a coherent story out of it! I was confused how to weave a common theme through all those occurrences. You have provided great clarity with an excellent essay! Thanks a lot.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I mailed to inform you that I am accepted at INSEAD !! I am thrilled at the moment. Thank you for being a part of it in making this happen.


Robbie Walker
It was a real pleasure working with you. The process was seamless and I am very happy with the final result! You are very easy to talk to and your comments were quite clear and actionable. I will keep in touch and let you know what schools I get into (keep your fingers crossed!) and where I decide to study.


Jennifer Bloom
I just wanted to write a quick note to thank you for your help during my application writing, and also to let you know that I was accepted at the Chicago GSB earlier today! Makes for a very nice Christmas present and it definitely takes a load off my mind! I specifically want to say thanks for all your help with essays, as well as with general application preparation. Your thoughts on my essays were invaluable, and I believe played a major part in my acceptance. Furthermore, I really believe that the way you provided constructive criticism and pushed me to think on my own not only brought out the best in my application, but will also help me when I do start business school next year. Finally, I think your knowledge of each school I applied to and what they were most focused on when reading an application were essential to my getting in to Chicago. In my view, the final essays I sent were charismatic in style and also got across everything I wanted to say in a concise manner! I will be recommending your service to all those I know who are thinking about applying to business school. -- Also accepted to Wharton & LBS


Jennifer Bloom
Hi Jennifer, First of all, thank you very very much for being so supportive and sending me the essays back so soon. It really helped me submit them by avoiding the rush. I like the frank discussions we have regarding the edits. Thank you for guarding my interests.


Michelle Stockman
Without Michelle I wouldn't have successfully submitted a compelling application to Stern. She did a marvelous job in turning my bland and generic sentences into crisp and relevant statements. I was completely off topic on one of my essays and she provided exceptional guidance that prevented a catastrophic mistake. Her greatest asset is her ability to articulate every idea with a punch which brought my essays to life.

Michelle took a personal interest in my application and her out of the box thinking helped me present my story in a very creative way. She was really fun to work with and I hope I find people like her in business school. Thank you Michelle!"


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis was absolutely fantastic help overall and I rate her services outstandingly. She was extremely thorough in the interview training and feedback and it really proved to be a great help! I had quite a tough interview with HBS and thanks to the training I managed to hold my own quite well and felt very well-prepared. I've now been accepted by HBS so I am very happy. Your service is extremely professional and I will certainly recommend accepted.com to all my friends!


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis. Hope you are well. Just to let you know that I got accepted to the Haas School of Business (UC Berkeley)! I am excited! Thank you again for all your help with my application process.


Jennifer Bloom
You have done it again! First you get me into my L.L.M. degree at NYU and now you get me into the highly competitive J.S.D. degree! I just got home and found my admissions letter for the NYU J.S.D. program waiting under my door. I absolutely cannot believe it and could not have done it without your help. In all honesty, the day before the application was due I had completely given up on my personal statement and didn't have the motivation or desire to continue. Your spirit and perseverance (and what I can only assume was an all night editing effort) transformed my boring personal statement into a work of art that I was truly proud of. You are actually the first person after my parents I thought of telling as you really have made my academic dreams come true. I am seriously considering calling my first born Jennifer.


Jennifer Bloom
I forwarded this last version of the letter to USC. And I found out today that I was admitted. :) I'm surprised about how quickly they got back to me, especially since I heard that they would be reviewing waitlisted applicants beginning in May. I didn't even have to forward another recommendation letter! I really appreciate your guidance in helping this happen. :)


Cydney Foote
Hi there. I was accepted to Harvard Business School, Northwestern's Kellogg School of Management and Yale's School of Management. I was also added to the waitlist at Columbia Business School...Thanks again for your help! I found your company's service invaluable and your insights priceless. You were the only company (i tried several) who focused on building out the core content of my essays rather than simply rephrasing the words I already wrote.


Jennifer Bloom
Just wanted to let you know I got my LBS admit last Friday. I wanted to thank you for all the work you put into my application, I couldn't have done it without you. At first, I thought I would never make it within one month to get everything done, but your efficiency and motivation really got me through this process. You made my essays shine. Thank you so much!!!


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, just received this email [notifying me of acceptance] from LBS. As you can imagine I have a big smile at the moment. Thanks again for your help during the application process; it made a huge difference.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis, the admissions committee at INSEAD has offered me a place. I wanted to write and share the news with you and thank you again for your effort and inputs into my essays. Your participation and editing were crucial factors that greatly helped my application. It's now onward to Pareee!!


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, Thank you - again - for all your help. You are a brilliant guide.


Jennifer Bloom
I am sure many people have told you this already but you are an incredible editor! If you ever offer writing classes, I will be the first to sign up.


Tanis Kmetyk
I am very pleased and honoured to tell you that I have been accepted at INSEAD MBA September intake. I would like to thank you, as I am fully aware that you participated in that success. Thank you very much for your trust, your help, and your advice.


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis—It’s official! I am all set to start the Columbia/LBS programme in September. I am delighted with the outcome. Thank you very much. I could not have done it without your help.


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis has been very committed and helpful on the interview service. I even got accepted to Columbia Business School. :)


Tanis Kmetyk
Guess what Tanis: Columbia accepted me !!! :) Your preparation sure helped a lot. Thank you again for your commited approach.


Tanis Kmetyk
I received the INSEAD offer and your help on this was critical. Thank you very much.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks for your great help, I got in at Chicago and Yale.


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, just wanted to let you know that I was accepted at INSEAD! ...thanks a lot for all your help ... as you can imagine I'm so happy :)


Tanis Kmetyk
Hi Tanis, I am really appreciate your efforts. I would want to say to you Big Thanks for your work!


Tanis Kmetyk
I AM IN!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUPI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks again for your invaluable help during the process. I think we did a wonderful job. -- Accepted at INSEAD


Cindy Tokumitsu
I want to thank you for all of your amazing help throughout my applications process. I could not have done it without your editing and guidance, and I truly appreciate it. I would be delighted to recommend your services in the future. – Accepted to Michigan


Jennifer Bloom
Also I want to point out that Ms. Bloom was really supportive all through the process. She helped me with real passion and not just as a business partner. -- Accepted to Duke


Jennifer Bloom
And just one last thing - from the short time I have been working with Jennifer, she really gave some excellent points that added much more colors to my essays. She is very original and smart and VERY professional (besides the fact that she seems to be also an amazing person). Where have you been all this time?!


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, you are seriously brilliant as an editor.


Cydney Foote
I am honestly very excited to be working with you, and I can't wait to see the kinds of comments/suggestions you may have for me. The accepted.com price for edits is probably the highest I have found, but all of the other websites don't show the editors actually on staff. The fact that the biographies were readily available to the public made the company very transparent, which gave it more legitimacy in my opinion. And your background was impressive to say the least. I was so tempted to use a cheaper service, but here I am at your doorstep. I'm sure I'll be purchasing editing services a couple more times in the near future.


Tanis Kmetyk
It's difficult to describe the work Tanis has done with just a rating. She has done an amazing job in translating my ideas into text and my drafts into high quality essays. But most importantly, she has steered my application in the correct direction. She has tremendously improved my application in focus and I feel we have managed to put my strengths effectively on paper.


Tanis Kmetyk
Oh my gosh...this is great stuff Tanis! I'll get back to you on this ASAP (by tomorrow :) ) Thank you SOOOO much!!


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, with the help of your comments I think I improved the content a lot. I must say, I was really impressed with how you transferred my ideas into an excellent essay. -- Accepted at LBS


Tanis Kmetyk
I sincerely appreciate the support that Tanis has extended to me during this entire process, both this time around and the last time I applied to b-school 3 years ago.


Tanis Kmetyk
Dear Tanis--Letting you know,I got my first admit to Sauder. Heard from them yesterday. Thanks again for your help.


Tanis Kmetyk
But most importantly, she has steered my application in the correct direction. She has tremendously improved my application in focus and I feel we have managed to put my strengths effectively on paper.


Cydney Foote
Hi Cydney, I have good news! I got accepted at MIT!! I could not believe it and I thank you so much for helping me getting accepted!!!! My applications totally improved with your advice.... But your effort was huge too. You spent days, nights and weekends helping me and I thank you very much for doing that.


Tanis Kmetyk
But above all I'd like to thank on behalf of all your clients for making sure that some of us live our dream. We only live once (as far as we know) and you make sure that this one precious time is really worth it! It's not about the money your services cost, it's about the recognition, respect and love that you and your staff collect from all of us. Words cannot express how I feel about our (and not my) success right now. Congratulations for having consultants like Tanis in your firm. She exceeded the strict professional boundaries and became also a friend in this long and stressful procedure. (Accepted at Columbia)


Tanis Kmetyk
Thank you very much Tanis! It was a very stressful time trying to prepare for my MBA and marriage at the same time, while working - but your help made it much easier to bear. Thank you so much! (Accepted at Cornell-Johnson)


Tanis Kmetyk
I really appreciate your efforts Tanis. I want to say Big Thanks for your work!”


Tanis Kmetyk
Guess what: Columbia accepted me !!! :)…Your preperation sure helped a lot. Thank you again for your committed approach.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy was ultra-constructive, even when she was cruelly ending my love affair with my own language...Cindy is fantastic, and you're lucky to have her (and so was I)!!!!! Thanks for the help.


Tanis Kmetyk
I have finally submitted my Oxford - Said R2 application as well. So now it's time to keep my fingers crossed and wait for the interview decisions. I will like to thank you again for all your help and support during last 3 months. You have really helped me put together a strong application this time for LBS as well as for Said and i hope that results will be positive this time.


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you for doing great work in such a short time and on such short notice. I truly appreciate it.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I got accepted into Wharton. What a great way to start the day! Thank you for all the upstanding guidance you provided for my Wharton goals essay.


Jennifer Bloom
Thanks Jennifer. This is wonderful and much better than before you assisted me. I'll let you know how it all goes.....


Jennifer Bloom
I've had interviews with Chicago, Wharton, Yale and LBS so far. I'm pretty sure the help you provided had a BIG role to play in that!I will let you know when I hear from schools. Again, thanks for your help - it was invaluable.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy has been very helpful and guided me through my essays. My toughest challenge was to come up with a structure for my essays and she has helped me through this process. I could not have done the job I did with the essays without her help. -- Accepted Duke Cross-Continent program


Jennifer Bloom
I had my interview this evening. You were dead on when it came to the questions. It was a map of the mock interview you conducted for me. Your inputs really helped me. Thanks a lot for your support.


Cydney Foote
Anyway, thank you for your timely reviews of my essays. I truly believe you were able to capture my ideas and thoughts when I was unable to articulate them into words. I also appreciate you focusing my essay writing in the right direction. All in all, your services were extremely helpful and quality of the essays is higher than what I would have done on my own.


Cydney Foote
As for the resume, your comments were very helpful in directing it to more active statements rather than job descriptions. I am also happy with the resume I submitted, definitely a marked improvement over my initial resume.


Tanis Kmetyk
Working with Tanis was like asking a close friend or parent for help in the sense that she really cared about the quality of the essay as, if she had a personal stake in it and not as if it was just a work assignment. Unlike a friend or relative, however, Tanis also added value: excellent editing and insights into how to use my particular experiences to make the best essay/letter. Tanis also gave valuable recommendations and advice for areas of my application beyond the specific service I requested. In my case I was worried about my application since I have non-traditional work experience, but Tanis was able to work with me to make weaknesses into strengths. Highly recommended!


Jennifer Bloom
Dear Jennifer
Thank you for all your help on the essays - your insights in structure and content have greatly helped to improve their quality. -- Accepted to Insead and Yale


Tanis Kmetyk
I did the interviews. I received the INSEAD offer and your help on this was critical. Thank you very much.


Tanis Kmetyk
Couldn't believe it: applied to three school, accepted to all of them...Again, this would not have been possible without your precious help, a bit of psychology, a bit of sincerity, a bit of rigor, a bit of realism... Well, you get the perfect recipe for MBA admission.You are an excellent cook, a "chef."


Cydney Foote
I would like to share some great news with you – I have been accepted at both Insead and HEC! I would like to thank you for all the help that you gave in making my applications – without these my admissions would have gone through. A big star for all the work you put into it


Cindy Tokumitsu
It has been a phenomenal experience working with Cindy. Her thoughtful questions and suggestions have helped me in discovering myself thereby making my application more presentable to the admissions committee. It is very important to hear a calm reasonable voice that guides you through this process, especially since the entire application and any possible ups and downs can drive you through an emotional rollercoaster. I think Cindy has really mastered the art of understanding exactly what the admissions committee is looking for and tailoring ones application to meet those needs. Truly, this has been a wonderful experience.


Tanis Kmetyk
Just got the feedback from IESE, I AM IN!!!! Thanks a lot for your excellent work, I am convinced, I wouldn't have been so far without your help.


Tanis Kmetyk
I have been accepted for admissions to MIT Sloan as of last night. Thank-you (Tanis) for helping me prepare for the interview, it definitely helped. I have also got a placement at London Business School. Thank-you so much for helping me prepare for the interview. Really pleased about the result.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks again SO much for your help Tanis!!! I got into HBS!!! Again, thank you so much for all your help, it was extremely helpful!!


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks for your great help Tanis, I got in at Chicago and Yale.


Tanis Kmetyk
I am very pleased and honoured to tell you that I have been accepted at INSEAD. I would like to thank you Tanis, as I am fully aware that you participated in that success. Thank you very much for your trust, your help, and your advice.


Tanis Kmetyk
Couldn't believe it: applied to three schools (INSEAD, IESE, ESADE), accepted to all of them...this would not have been possible without your (Tanis) precious help, a bit of psychology, a bit of sincerity, a bit of rigor, a bit of realism... Well, you (have) the perfect recipe for MBA admissions. You are an excellent cook, a "chef." Thanks a lot-- Your meal


Tanis Kmetyk
I received the INSEAD offer and your help on this was critical. Thank you very much


Tanis Kmetyk
I would like to highlight that Tanis was absolutely fantastic help overall and I rate her services outstandingly. She was extremely thorough in the interview training and feedback and it really proved to be a great help! I had quite a tough interview with HBS and thanks to the training I managed to hold my own quite well and felt very well-prepared. I`ve now been accepted by HBS so I am very happy. Your service is extremely professional and I will certainly recommend accepted.com to all my friends!


Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, I have been offered admission to London Business School, got my acceptance email last night. Thank-you so much for helping me prepare for the interview. Really pleased about the result.
Thank-you once again.


Tanis Kmetyk
I read your latest comments. You are amazing! With 3 days to the deadline, I will use your valuable inputs to get the final version. Also, I will send you the final version just so that you can see how helpful you have been to me.

Thanks for the amazing help!



Tanis Kmetyk
Tanis, thank you so much! I think you did a tremendous job, I really liked it.


Tanis Kmetyk
Thanks again for giving your best and making my essay look awesome.


Jennifer Bloom
I just received a call from Linda Meehan, and good news: I`ve been accepted to Columbia!!! Thank you SO MUCH for all of your help!!!

The interview by the way went really well, I think that I was able to steer the interview to be more conversational in nature, and by the end we were joking around like old friends.



Jennifer Bloom
Thank you for all your help on the essays - your insights in structure and content have greatly helped to improve their quality.


Jennifer Bloom
Let me also take the opportunity to say again what I told Jennifer when I spoke to her: there is no way I would have gotten in without her guidance.

Your internet site was also an incredible source.Overall, your service is exceptional, in every way, and I will definitely recommend to all prospective applicants to go to you first.



Jennifer Bloom
I wanted to let you know that i have been accepted to Columbia!!!! I am super excited and happy. I wanted to thank you for everything. Without you it wouldn't have been possible. I really appreciate it. Take care.


Jennifer Bloom
Just wanted to update you – I am in at HBS :)
Thank you so much for helping me to make a dream come true


Jennifer Bloom
I am thrilled!!! I got an email from CBS this morning saying that I was admitted!!!!!!! My first choice!!!! I am very very happy. Jennifer, I want to express my heartfelt gratitude and appreciation to you guiding me thru the application process. The inspiration you gave me to the essays was amazing! Thank you so much for being very patient with me as well! It was wonderful working with you.


Jennifer Bloom
Dear Jennifer: Something I forgot to mention, though I just glance through the modified essay, U ARE EXCELLENT.

I felt a bit frustrated [when] I first drafted the essay because it feels "flat," and now it is motion picture to me. :)

I will go to buy another 5 hour package for the rest of my essay, "U just earned it!!!", and let`s begin the rest of my essay from now on. :)

Thank U very much again.



Cydney Foote
Cyd was critical ~ she gave her opinion freely and mentioned crap was crap when it was. She showed a lot of interest in getting the application the best it could be and her criticism was apt. I would not change a thing ~ your services are very good!


Cydney Foote
Sorry about replying late. Cydney has helped me a lot. She helped me really look into myself by asking great questions, find something about myself that I wasn't even aware of, answer questions by reshuffle/reorganize topics, and polish words, etc. ...

I'd definitely recommend Accepted. And I wish I had turned to Accepted from very beginning instead of working alone for 2 months.

I hope to get interviews and will turn to you again soon.



Cindy Tokumitsu
Hello Cindy,
Firstly, I would like to express my sincere appreciation and thanks to you for helping me pull the UNC application together in such a short time.

You work was high quality. Your feedback was very specific and focused to the point. My essays went from bland and generic to concise, exceptional, and competitive. Further, your turnaround time was exceptionally fast. I appreciate you sending feedback at 11pm and later. After I talked to the UNC adcom director, I was very worried about having missed the deadline and my ability to pull together the application in the next two days. Your effort is what made the difference for me in sending in the application by today. Thanks for going the extra mile.

I look forward to working with you on the Duke essays.



Cindy Tokumitsu

Thanks for your congratulations. I am very excited about the admission in Wharton (also accepted to Michigan and Duke). It is so worthy to buy your service.

Cindy [Tokumitsu] is very professional and nice. She not only gave me many constructive suggestions and help on my essays but also worked overtime during Christmas and New Year holiday to meet my tough deadline requirement. I am very impressed by her and your service.

I began asking your help on 2nd round. It is obviously my results in 2nd round are much better than those in the 1st round, which further confirmed your value to MBA application.

Thank you and Cindy again for your professional service. And I will surely recommend you to my friends who are going to apply MBA.



Cindy Tokumitsu
Also, I wanted to note that before choosing your service I talked to someone from [Competitor A].  I had to pay around $100 to discuss my chances at other schools.  Their advisor was polite, but not very helpful.  She pointed me at second tier schools and it felt like she was holding back saying: "You don`t have a chance at top schools".  In the end I choose your firm, not knowing how helpful it was going to be.  Cindy really was amazing.  She really coached me along, making sure that I got my true feelings into my essays.  Also, a year ago my girlfriend used [Competitor B] for her gradschool essay.  She handed him $200 and her essay and just some minor changes.  She did get into Stanford and Berkeley, but we both felt that it was a ripoff.  I have had a lot of experiences with other essay consultants and Cindy has been wonderful.


Cindy Tokumitsu
The 2 day turnaround time was why I was drawn to Accepted. And the service was truly exceptional !


Cindy Tokumitsu
I got my ADMIT! from Wharton today. Thank you so much Cindy! I couldn`t have done with without you!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I just wanted to let you know that I was accepted into the NYU Stern Part time program yesterday. I am very excited since this was my #1 target school. I honestly think (although I may never know for sure) that my essays were among the strongest components of my application. I would not have been able to so such a good job without your assistance.


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you very much. Accepted and Jennifer have been such a great help in helping me navigate the turbulent process of applying to business school. ... Jennifer and the team at Accepted are top notch and will definitely maximize a person's chance of getting into a program of their choice.

Accepted is by far the BEST service for aspiring candidates. I was previously referred to Accepted by a friend and will definitely recommend anybody else in the process to your service.

Once again, thank you for all your help. You guys are great. -- Accepted to INSEAD



Cindy Tokumitsu
I'm absolutely thrilled to have been accepted. Thanks for offering your company's great services (on such short notice too). --Accepted to Stanford GSB after using Accepted.com's waitlist services.


Cydney Foote
I would like to thank you for all your hard work. You really made the difference in helping me make my deadline. It's hard to believe you did it all in 10 days!

I was hesitant in using your service at first because I found Accepted.com from the internet and wasn't sure about the quality of service. Price was also a big issue....The end result with you was excellent and worth every penny.

I really thought you gave my essays. LOR, and resume great attention...Your concern is greatly appreciated.

Anyways, I just wanted to express my gratitude and would definitely recommend Cdney at Accepted.com anytime.



Cindy Tokumitsu
Thanks for your help always. I was admitted by HBS, very excited to share the positive result with u. And also please help me to thank Linda.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Yes...I have been admitted to Wharton. Thanks for making my essays shine.


Jennifer Bloom
Thank you again for all of your support and advice throughout this process. I wouldn't even think about trying this "gamble" without having the confidence of 5 amazing essays and an outstanding resume on my application to support me. The quality of those documents would not have been even remotely possible without your help. I can only describe your contributions to my application with one word...stellar."


Jennifer Bloom
I have got an admit at INSEAD. And I am very convinced that this would not have been possible without your help and guidance. You have a very applicant specific approach and it has helped me improve my application 100 fold. I would definitely recommend your service to all my friends who plan to apply in the future.

[Later] The service provided by Accepted.com is great and helped me a lot. It was well worth the amount I spent. I would surely recommend it to my friends who will be applying in the future.



Jennifer Bloom
Thank you very much for your help on essays. Without your help I would have gone ahead with very weak stories in the essay. And your editing of essays was literally work of "magic wand" :-) I have already received interview invitation from CMU i.e. I have gone past initial filtering phase where CMU discards 25% of apps.


Jennifer Bloom
It has been a humbling experience for me to realize what a nine-year vacation from academics has done to my core writing skills. I am very impressed with your editing capabilities as you continue to refine the "written disasters" that I like to call "rough drafts". I just wanted to thank you for all your help so far as we work through the application process.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Yes. I really want to thank Cindy for what she has done. She really did bring the best out of me and the $ is well worth the services. Kudos to her and also the interview database you have on accepted.com. (Accepted at Wharton)


Jennifer Bloom
Just got a confirmation that I have been admitted to the Kellogg School of Management. I know this wouldn't have been possible if it were not for your efforts and dedication in making me aware of my potential and then helping me showcase it in the best possible way through my essays.


Jennifer Bloom
Jennifer, I just completed my submission couple of minutes ago and I can't wait to thank you for the efforts you took to make me shine in my application. Irrespective of what happens now, you've done a great job.


Jennifer Bloom
You're fast.  I can't keep up with you


Jennifer Bloom
Great job Jennifer,
I am grateful to you for this essay specifically, because I was most worried about this one. Didn't really know how to put it together. Thanks


Jennifer Bloom
I was amazed at the way you [edited] the essay. I would on my own have never been able to put it in this way. It conveys the meaning I actually wanted to convey


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy has provided dedicated, and personalized professional service beyond my expectation. I'm very satisfied!


Cydney Foote
I would highly recommend Accepted.com, and I have a few friends who are thinking about applying in the coming year. I will send them your way! I also would give Cydney a BIG thank you for all of her help. She is a valuable asset to the Accepted.com team. (Accepted at UT and Vanderbilt)


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy has been a great help to me, and I just wanted to let you know that I am extremely satisfied with your services. -- Accepted to MIT and Wharton


Cydney Foote
I just got accepted to Oxford. I am on cloud nine. Thank you so much for all of your help. There is no way I could`ve gotten it without your efforts…
I will certainly be referring anyone and everyone I know to you who is considering business school. Thank you again.


Tanis Kmetyk
First of all Tanis helped me to select the experiences in my life (my particular stories) that could better impact the adcoms in the several schools I intended to apply. She really goes in depth always looking for your whys and hows behind your particular experiences. I personally thought before working with Tanis that I had perfectly selected my stories; however, after a few email interchanges I changed my stories quite a bit and I really think they have made a stronger impact. Additionally, she really understands both the American culture and the European culture and had worked with several alumni from my undergrad school in Paris.... She made an extraordinary work with the essays in terms of structure and form. All the contents of each of my essays had a reason to be there that we had discussed before. I really loved the approach we took to work: first, I submitted my first version, then she tried to understand what I wanted to say and why, finally an edit came up. I think that in this way we really came up with something very personal and true about myself... Even if I was based in Mexico and she was in Paris, she responded quickly assuring that I had enough work for me weekends (the only time I could really work on my essays). In spite of a death within her family the first week of January (!), she was there to make all the final edits I needed before submitting. I could never thank her enough for that... Tanis has helped my not only with my essays but with the application process overall. I would absolutely recommend her with no [hesitation] to someone else.


Jennifer Bloom
Thanks for all the help. It was great working with you and saved me a lot of time. Even though my writing skills are strong, there was no way I would have produced such quality essays in terms of style and content, without your strong input. I especially liked the way we worked together to shape my essays, showing strong initiative, work and leadership experience. I also think that with the high quality of the essays, my application to the Top US business schools stands a real chance now.


Jennifer Bloom
You really improved my essays and I recommended your services to my colleagues


Jennifer Bloom
I really appreciate your comments and feed back and I can see the difference in my essays now. Thanks a lot for your help.


Cydney Foote
I know I end each email with this, but I can't thank you enough. You have been invaluable! I know I still have a long way to go here, but wanted to let you know I appreciate your effort and honesty. It is making an enormous difference in my approach and understanding of what I need to convey.


Cydney Foote
Thank you for the congratulations [upon acceptance to Fuqua]. I am really happy!!

And make sure you treat Cydney well. She is really SUPER and I owe a lot of my success to her!!!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I cannot appreciate Cindy's help enough. She is the most pleasing person to work with and produces the highest quality work. She has impressed me. [Accepted to CBS EMBA program]


Tanis Kmetyk
"Just found out...... I`m in, I`m in.... I`m in..... yeah...... so excited!!!!!!!! Thank you very much for you help =D. (Accepted at HBS & Wharton) "


Tanis Kmetyk
"Insead will no longer be needed as I got accepted into Tuck! Thank you very much for your help and support on the essays, which according to the women at Tuck were outstanding."


Cindy Tokumitsu
One more update. Over the last week, I found out that I got into Stanford and Wharton offered me [a grant]... needless to say, I am very happy and going out to dinner tonight and to celebrate. One last thought I had regarding the W grant: your help went beyond helping me obtain admission to actually increasing my chances (I believe) of getting offered a merit-based fellowship--talk about unexpected ROI : )


Cindy Tokumitsu
"I will say that Cindy Tokumitsu did an amazing job... She also gave me very good advice [for HBS interview] and did a great job relaxing me before the interview. The following days she was also accessible and I spoke with her after our meeting for additional advice. I would certainly rate Cindy`s performance a 10 and would say that I am very satisfied with the service that I got from Cindy and Accepted.com."


Jennifer Bloom
"I am writing to let you know a piece of good news! I am accepted by the Chicago GSB MBA program and I would like to give my sincere gratitude to you and your services. Especially, I would love to give a big THANK YOU to my advisor and editor, Jennifer Bloom. Jennifer has been Instrumental in the overall application process, and her advice and editing help on my essays, have directly affected and impacted my application -- it makes the overall package a lot better and certainly increased my competitiveness as a candidate. Besides the essays, Jen`s advice on other parts of the process such as interviews and thank you letters are also critical. Last but not least, it is Jennifer`s idea that I should apply to Chicago first, as I might have a better chance as a reapplicant -- a strategy which is spot on! Thank you very much again to you and Jennifer. I would certainly recommend this service to anyone who`s interested in applying to b-schools. "


Cindy Tokumitsu
Wanted to share the very good news that I have been accepted to both Wharton and Kellogg! … Of course, I am certain that your help played a huge (HUGE!!) role in this success and I wanted to thank you again. This whole admissions process is so tough, mentally and physically, and I feel so lucky that I not only stumbled upon Accepted.com but also that I got to work with you. You are awesome!


Jennifer Bloom
From my experience the hardest thing about any organisation is getting in and Jennifer made a HUGE contribution to my chances with Wharton -- through her professionalism, charismatic writing style, probing questions and extensive background knowledge of the schools and what they were looking for.

Quite a few of the factors that can help you get in to a top US business school are out of your control. Using Jennifer`s help was in my control and I believe was the single most important decision I made in getting in.



Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy really took the time to understand my profile and what makes me unique as an applicant. She also was very helpful in working with me to find the best package for my essay needs. She had been unfailingly encouraging through out the application process. We all know what a daunting and emotional process it is and she not only understood my candidacy, but also what makes each school tic. This was tremendously helpful in crafting a approach to each school`s essays.


Tanis Kmetyk
So far, I have been accepted at 3 top 10 US schools (Kellogg, Duke, Michigan), thanks to TANIS.
I am a prospective MBA student from France (background : high tech). Tanis is a very nice person. She personally cares about her clients. When I first submitted her my essays, I was a bit stunned by all the bad things she had to stay about them ! But not only she could criticize, but also she was able to say WHY they were bad and HOW I could improve them. She helped me on 7 essays, gave me advice about my choice of schools, virtually held my hand when I was feeling depressed. She also understands what it is like to be an international student : she has an international background, lives in Europe and is fluent in French.


Cydney Foote
This edit is really really impressive, thanks for turning my verbose novel into a very very coherent story. I know this one was really hard to bring down [to the word limit] as I had put in tons of details. I really like the fact that you`ve found a place for all my details."


Cydney Foote
I couldn`t wait to let you know that I`ve been offered admission to business school!! Your help with the essays was truly the difference between the rejection last year and the admit[s] this year.


Tanis Kmetyk
I am glad to report that I have just been accepted to INSEAD FBL for Sept. And it feels really good!

I think that the essays were very critical in my case... and as I said earlier, you have been very helpful in the fine tuning of these pieces... it worked, making this accepted.com consulting a very worthwhile investment.



Jennifer Bloom
Thank you [Jennifer Bloom] for your professional suggestions. You are my perfect consultant!


Jennifer Bloom
Thanks Linda and thanks to you and Jennifer for all your help in getting my application together (accepted to Wharton) as well as all your subsequent advice. I will keep you informed of the other schools.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I do owe a large measure of this success [accepted at Fuqua] to Cindy`s help and encouragement. .... I can`t imagine having worked on the number of applications without her help or otherwise having >24 hrs in a day!

Besides the operational help, she was also instrumental in shaping my positioning and being there as a sounding board for my ideas. I also used the accepted.com website often for pointers and to read from other applicant`s experiences. I`m glad to have had both Cindy`s and your help during this often frustrating process.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I was admitted to the Columbia January Program ... yesterday! Thank you so much for your help. I am certain that your involvement was instrumental in making me a competitive candidate.


Jennifer Bloom
your editing is superb! I can write the essays [quickly because] you have done the ... organization.


Tanis Kmetyk
"Working with Tanis on these INSEAD essays was a wonderful experience. Not only the writing quality of my essays has been significantly improved, but also, thanks to Tanis journalistic questioning tactics and perspicacity, new ideas have emerged reinforcing the points that I was trying to make.

Tanis can be very critical in her editorial work. She will track the logical gaps or flaws that any author is likely to make under word-count pressure. While she is never authoritative on the content, her sense of psychology allows her to make educated guess and improvement suggestions, which hit the spot almost each time.

I do not know whether my application will be successful, but in any case I know that accepted.com services will have significantly contributed to my chances. I just have to look back at my first draft to see that Tanis and I have come a long way together. "



Jennifer Bloom
How are you? Just wanted to let you know that the interview went very well. You were dead-on (again - do you ever get sick of being right?!) about their concern for yield. I believe that might have been its only purpose! But thanks to your help, I think I did a good job demonstrating my genuine interest in the program.

Thanks again. To be honest this last bit of help was really exceptional and much appreciated. My praise of Accepted.com to others will be that much more enthusiastic.



Cydney Foote
Thanks for the edits so far. I'm really, really amazed with what you did with Essay 2. It looks like one of my strongest essays now, and I started with the expectation that it would turn out as the worst!


Jennifer Bloom
WOW. THANKS FOR SUCH A SPEEDY RESPONSE!! I really like the work you've done thus far with all my essays, and this one is no exception. I think you have dramatically improved the wording and structure to make it more concise and coherent. I have included here a few additions as you recommended. Please do another edit.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I wanted to let you both know that I was admitted to Duke's Global Executive MBA! Thank you Cindy for your on-target suggestions, editing, and determined effort while working under a tight deadline ...I KNOW that you improved the presentation of my essays, and I can't offer you a more appreciative THANK YOU as I excitedly look forward to beginning at Duke...


Jennifer Bloom
Many thanks for your help on the edits. They were brilliant! Especially the essay on culture shock - totally amazing!! My family was so impressed with it when I showed it to them!


Jennifer Bloom
Glad to let you know that I have got admission from University of Michigan just few minutes ago. I have a lot of people to thank but I do think that you should be the first one. [The adcom] said that my application is very strong and I think [my application] is "strong," but you make me sound very strong. Many thanks!


Cydney Foote
I have worked with Cydney Foote on a daily basis for the past four months on my business school applications. In that time I have come to regard Cydney as true professional and an asset to work with. Professionally, Cydney was available 7 days a week and I always knew weeks in advance the days that she would not be available. Essentially, her schedule always matched mine. She was always available by phone and her turnaround time on my essays was never more than 24 hours. The quality of her work was also exceptional. Even when she was working on one essay – Cydney always considered it in the context of my entire application. This was the strategic expertise I sought. Cydney never wrote essays for me or just edited them for grammar, but instead she vigilantly critiqued and analyzed my essays for content, logic, language and impact. She invested the time to get to know me and thus was able to incorporate aspects of my life I never considered into my essays. I strongly recommend Cydney to anyone applying to business schools. The focused concentration Cydney provided was greater than the unstructured concentration my friend and family could provide. I am certain my applications to business school are stronger because of her help.


Jennifer Bloom
I appreciate Jennifer's work very much - I believe that she did add value to my essays and did improve my chances! Overall, I think that you offer excellent services for MBA applicants. I will recommend your company to those who will follow me.


Cydney Foote
Thank you very much Linda. I wanted to say as well that Cydney really helped me get through my creative block in writing all the essays. Also it was great that she was able to work around my schedule and returned almost every essay back to me in 24 hours or less. [Accepted at CMU}


Cindy Tokumitsu
Linda and Cindy: I would like to thank both of you for your encouragements and wonderful service! I wouldn't have walked so far [accepted at Johnson] without your help. Definitely I will recommend your service to other applicants I know of.I will keep you posted with the results, decision and even my future career progress. Even our working relationship might end, our friendship will last forever!


Jennifer Bloom
I've just been informed that I got the nod from NYU! I checked their web site on Friday and my decision was there. Once again, thanks for your help! Not only for your invaluable assistance with the preparation of a first-class application, but also for the moral support during this nerve-wrecking process. [Later...]I just received the materials from Stern and guess what? I was awarded a fellowship that covers 20-25% of the tuition of the first year! It's really unbelievable! I wouldn't have made it without your support. Saying that your services were well worth the costs is an understatement. Once again, Thank you!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Thank you very much for your note. It's a wonderful feeling to have been accepted by Harvard, a school that until now, I had only dreamed of attending -- but, sincerely, I could not have done it without the help of Cindy. She made sense of all my confused ideas...and inspired me to write well. But the best part was her editing -- it was almost magical. Thanks once again,


Cydney Foote
Cydney, I wanted to tell you that yesterday I received an acceptance to the UCLA MBA program !! I feel very lucky with the increase in applications. Anyway now it will be tough to decide between UCLA and Carnegie Mellon ... Anyway thanks for all the help on the essays! With my limited time to revise the essays (last 2 weeks of Dec) I know your help was key to my acceptance.


Cydney Foote
I just got the offer from UC Berkeley ( part time). Thanks so much for your help. To be very honest, without your editing, it is almost impossible for me to get in.


Cindy Tokumitsu
In general, I was very pleased with everything. I thought Cindy did a wonderful job in all regards. From a macro perspective, I thought she did an excellent job of not only organizing my thoughts, but pushing me to develop more complete and interesting ideas. She also provided me with examples of what others have done, which I felt was invaluable. She also did a fantastic job of turning essays around in a good time frame and always stuck to her stated deadline. Furthermore, her edits to sentence structure always generally helped the flow. Beyond the actually editing process, I found Cindy to be extremely helpful as I worked through a fairly stressful process. She was supportive and informative at all times.


Cydney Foote
When I began the application process, I did not think I had much of a chance at any of the schools where I was applying. Cyd was a great support, and with her help I was able to convince myself and the admissions committee [at Wharton and Duke] that I had something special to offer. The money I spent on Accepted.com's service was very well spent!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I got into Columbia!! And I've decided that I'll definitely be attending columbia this fall. I'm obviously very excited. I wanted to thank you once again for all of your help. As always, I won't hesitate to recommend you all of my friends!


Tanis Kmetyk
"I would like to thank you very much for your help with the essays. It was great support at a crucial moment when I had a hard time to keep up the spirit."""


Tanis Kmetyk
"Wow! I reviewed your comments and all I can say is wow! I like your suggestions and am working on the responses.... [Later]...thanks for your help with the letters and essays. You made a difference."


Cydney Foote
Thanks for the edits so far. I'm really, really amazed with what you did with Essay 2. It looks like one of my strongest essays now, and I started with the expectation that it would turn out as the worst!


Cydney Foote
Yes, I just read the essays, and I think they're great. I will need to adjust a few of the factual points, but otherwise I feel these are a huge improvement and really get to the point of what I need to get across.

Thanks so much for your time and I may very well be in touch soliciting additional help with future application essays.


Cydney Foote
Concerning the quantitative essay, I'd like you to do a full edit. Because of your excellent writing ability, I'm confident this investment is worthy.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I am getting a bargain price for the services I am receiving. Cindy has been invaluable to me in writing my essays, and I fully intend to stick with her for the rest of my application process.


Linda Abraham
I just wanted to let you and Linda know that I was accepted at the U of Chicago Evening Program... I wanted to say thank you to both of you for all of your time and efforts on my essays. I truly do not believe I would have gotten in without your efforts and you can quote me on that!

Good luck to both of you and thanks again.


Jennifer Bloom
I was quite impressed with the service and my editor Jennifer Bloom helped me in more ways than I expected. Since I only used the editing services, I expected that she would just merely edit the essays without putting too much emphasis on the macro level. She took my essays apart and for some I had to completely start all over. She took a look at all the essays as a whole package, not just focusing on just the individual aspect of the essays. She really helped me by giving me direction on what to write and how I should convey them. In the end she made my essays flow and sound a lot stronger than any of my previous efforts.


Jennifer Bloom
Thanks! I guess that's it for the INSEAD essays! I think the essays have come a real long way with your help. I also would like to say that the service that you have provided for me has far surpassed my expectations. I initially thought the online editing services would merely be a restructure of my sentences, but you have added so much more with your comments, restructuring, advice and view on my application as a whole. I feel so much more confident in sending these essays in now!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Just wanted to let you know that I got into part-time MBA program at NYU, starting this September. I'm sure the essays were very helpful in the process… Cindy was great to work with!


Judy Gruen
I just received notification that I've been awarded a Dean's Fellowship for $15,000! I think that's basically equivalent to a full ride to that school. Thanks again to accepted.com!


Linda Abraham
Linda Abraham: A Small Fee Helps Overcome Some Big Hurdles

The greatest challenge in writing an MBA essay package is keeping sight of the goal. Anyone can write a great first sentence. And we all innately know our special strengths and weaknesses. But, getting our complete and cohesive story on paper is quite another matter.

What Linda Abraham Brings to the Table:

Linda`s multi-step approach, brainstorming, macro-editing, and then micro-editing, is a formula for a successful essay package for any school.

Linda helped me by keeping my priorities straight as I formulated my initial conceptual framework for the first essay package. We discussed and "brainstormed" some initial concept drafts. I`m not going to say it was easy. But with Linda on my team, it was certainly not the painful process it could have been.

From the initial concept drafts, we "macro-edited" what I had written¦ and that`s where Linda really began delivering. Lindas experience and, frankly, her intellect allows her to see the "big picture" She reads from the perspective of a school admission officer, looking past the flimsy and the irrelevant and on to what`s important.

As she learned who I am and what my strengths are, she combined this with her knowledge of each school`s quirks and focused me on the important issues and personal details. She helped me recognize my own recurring life themes as well, which we melded into the initial framework.

Linda Abraham Gets You to the Next Level:
After the first application, I thought that I knew what I wanted to say in each subsequent package. But, it wasn't just a matter of fitting together each element and theme to create the next essay package. Cut and paste doesn`t lend itself to answering new questions. On subsequent essay packages, Linda helped me take my essays to the next level:

By talking through each subsequent question set in the context of my existing conceptual framework, we crafted ever-better and specialized frameworks which included new details and themes. Linda brought out the inevitable and remarkable improvements because we were starting with a solid foundation. Wharton`s winning essay package, for example, was my fourth essay package and it was probably ten times better than my first.

I also cannot stress enough Linda`s unfailing objectivity and compassion. This is invaluable when drafting and re-drafting biographical essays. She`s not afraid to suggest rewrites. But, she was sensitive to my feelings. Considering that the subject-matter was "me," its important that my editor didn`t slash and burn my ideas. Instead, she would logically explain why certain elements are needed, unnecessary, redundant, or out of place. Basically, she was especially effective because she kept good lines of communication open.

I wholeheartedly recommend Linda Abraham to anyone applying to B-School. Linda can lead you through the process, from beginning to end. Or, if you are already a great writer, Linda can be a sounding board for ideas and can provide objective critiques.


Linda Abraham
Within the last week, I received the good news from both Northwestern & U of Chicago that I had been admitted to their MBA programs. I am sure your help in my essays played a part in my acceptance. Thanks again.


Jennifer Bloom
Although I have not heard from any of the three schools that I have applied to yet, I would just like to convey my sincerest appreciation for your help in writing my essays and that I thoroughly enjoyed working with you.

Although the writing process was very difficult and a grueling one for me, I cannot imagine how I could have finished the essays without your help. I only wish I could have worked with you earlier and applied to more schools.

Regardless of the school's decision, thank you so much and I would surely be back to work on more essays with you in the future should I need to apply again this fall.


Linda Abraham
I would like to thank you again for all of your help. You have really helped me to develop my essays and I feel that my chances for admission (to MBA programs) have greatly increased.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Cindy's work has been outstanding and really helped on my admission to Columbia.


Linda Abraham
I will be attending Stanford this fall. Your feedback was very helpful. Your changes definitely strengthened my essays. I really liked your directness when providing feedback. I also appreciated your ability to provide a quick turnaround to help me meet my deadlines. I highly recommend Accepted.com to anyone applying to business school.


Linda Abraham
I am very thankful for the wonderful work you have done with me; I know my applications were on a different level from last year. Since I did have significant work experience last year, I know for sure that the level of the essays made the difference this year. Thanks again.


Judy Gruen
As a business person and now an MBA student at Harvard, I know with certainty that hiring Judy to edit my essays was an immensely profitable investment. When I called Judy, I thought I had my essays nearly finished. I had poured in hours of hard work and I considered them polished pieces. With Judy’s help, these "nearly finished" essays were crafted into truly striking pieces that revealed my own thoughts and ideas. Her gifts for writing encouraged me and liberated me to say that which I truly wanted to say and to avoid tired, worn-down, dry expressions. Judy’s deep understanding of the admissions process at the world’s most selective MBA programs helped me to determine strategically how to aim my essays to my audience for the best possible effect. Her ability to draw forth the best in my creative work was the difference between my admission to a top 10 business school and a top 3 business school.


Jennifer Bloom
I am writing to tell you that I have been accepted to Harvard B school. I want to thank you for all your help!! I couldn't have done it without you. You have my deepest gratitude.


Judy Gruen
Judy, GOOD NEWS. I was just accepted to Chicago. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. Thanks for all your help. I am so happy. Thanks again. You guys are the best.


Linda Abraham
I would like [my retainer] refunded because I will no longer be needing your services. Why? I HAVE BEEN ACCEPTED TO MY NUMBER ONE CHOICE!!!!!! I received the call last Friday and am still beside myself. I cannot thank you enough, Linda, for your services.

Ironically, I did not use your services for my second choice of school and was rejected by them. Coincidence? Maybe, but I don't think so. The extra money spent was well worth it -- and I was even an English major as an undergraduate. Good writing (especially for this laborious process) takes time and needs as many perspectives as is possible given the time constraints.

Accepted.com gave me this perspective and helped me to maximize the effectiveness of my essays. A hearty thank you to you and your staff.

[A few days later] Thank you for the speedy refund, too -- another testament to the professionalism of Accepted.com.


Linda Abraham
Thank you so much for your help on my essays. I don't know what I would have done without you. I met with the admissions officer and he told me that he really enjoyed reading my essays. ... I was very impressed that he remembered and enjoyed mine. Thanks again for such a great job.


Cindy Tokumitsu
You can't imagine how happy I am today! I got the "ACCEPTED!" letter from Wharton today!!!! And I would like to share this immense happiness with you, since you are part of this. And I extend the CONGRATULATIONS that I received from Wharton to you! (And to Accepted.com too, of course! -- Thanks Linda! I knew I was [making] the right investment from my first conversation by phone with Cindy. But now I can recommend your services to everybody with great credentials!)


Judy Gruen
Thank you very much for your professional assistance with my graduate school application essays. I was infinitely more confident with my essay responses after implementing your suggested changes. In addition to providing helpful grammar and sentence structure suggestions, your ability to keep the essay response focused on the question, while maintaining the reader’s interest, was most helpful. I also commend you on your ability to suggest significant changes without sacrificing content or personality in the process ... Your timely responsiveness enabled me to complete an unheard of five applications in a six-week period, while working full-time and traveling nationwide for interviews ... I would be happy to recommend you to anyone who is contemplating your services. The value added from having a talented, fresh pair of eyes (such as yours) review an applicant’s essay response is well worth the price.


Judy Gruen
A quick note to say thank you very much indeed for your help. I found that in all my dealings with you I was dealt with extremely professionally and courteously. The help you gave in tidying up my essays was invaluable. Thank you also for tolerating my outrageous time demands; I noticed that you were often awake in the middle of the night editing. Naturally, I will keep you posted of my application status and will be recommending Accepted.com to my friends over the next year or two.


Linda Abraham
I ... wanted to inform you that I have been accepted by both UCLA and Wharton [and later MIT].

Linda -- thanks for ALL of your help over the past year... the MBA process is truly GRUELING, but has definitely been made easier (and successful!) with your and Lisa's help!


Jennifer Bloom
I sent my Wharton application today. I want to thank you for referring me to Jennifer. She is wonderful. She was very patient in editing my essays and the final product was really excellent. She knows about the process very well and it makes a lot of difference.


Judy Gruen
I got accepted at UNC and Georgetown and wait listed at Northwestern!

Pretty good for somebody who applied last round. I want to thank you again for all your help. Your talent for editing and sage guidance were without question a key element in my ... excuse me... "our" successful admissions strategy. I really felt like you were my partner in this very successful endeavor and I will always be thankful to you and the folks at Accepted.com for making my dream of attending a top business school a reality!


Jennifer Bloom
Yes! I got into Top 10 MBA Program! Thank you soooo much for your help. The Director of Admissions called me up and told me that I was able to present my credentials on paper very strongly! I owe it to you!


Jennifer Bloom
Just got a call from a Kellogg student that I was accepted for Kellogg's 1st round.

I cannot thank you enough for your help because as I said before I could not have pulled this off without your help.

Thank you to you, Linda [Abraham] and Accepted.com.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Congratulations for your "kick-ass" editing service on this essay!!!!!! You far exceeded my expectations!!!!!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I just wanted to let you know how pleased I am with [Accepted.com's] service so far. Cindy and I have been working together developing the Kellogg #1 essay and I have to say I am really pleased to date. I was very skeptical about your service, but now I understand the value. Congratulations on another satisfied customer.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Your editing job on Darden#1 was exceptional. It was exactly what I was seeking from this service!


Cindy Tokumitsu
I just wanted to drop both of you [Cindy Tokumitsu & Linda Abraham] a quick line to let you know I did get accepted to graduate school. I will be attending the University of Chicago this fall. As my stats were not the best I am sure I owe a lot to your help with the essays, the forums and other advice I received from your web page. Thanks for all of your help. I hope the word about Accepted.com continues to grow. Thanks again.