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What's New at Accepted.com
Tip of the Month
Grad Admission News You Can Use
Law Admission News You Can Use
MBA Admission News You Can Use
Medical Admission News You Can Use
Our Services
What's New at Accepted.com
MBA Chat
— Strategies for Success
MBA wannabe? Do you have questions about applying to
business schools? Well, here is your opportunity.
Accepted.com has invited Maxx Duffy of Maxx Associates
to co-host with Linda Abraham, founder of Accepted.com,
a chat entitled "Strategies for Success." The
online chat will be held on September 14, 1999 at 6:00
PM PDT (9:00 PM EDT).
This is a great opportunity to get solid answers to
your admissions questions. Our most recent secondary
essay chat on August 17 earned the following praise from
Matt Oster, one of the participants:
"The advice given on Accepted.com's chat was
right on target! They do a great job of helping
students not only to focus their answers to
specifically match the question, but also to highlight
certain unique traits of the student to help the
student stand out. I'm glad I attended this
chat!"
Don’t miss "Strategies for Success"!
For more information, please e-mail
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future.
Resume Writing
Ah, you may say when you mail that last envelope to the school of your
dreams, I’m finally finished with application writing. (Heartbroken, aren’t
you?) But don’t forget about your friends at Accepted.com just yet.
We can help you with your resume and the writing associated with a job hunt
— both important documents that can, like your essays, help show you to your
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You’re going to apply for summer internships, perhaps a residency, and
ultimately, a full-time job. You can trust Accepted.com’s editors to take a
personal interest in you, provide excellent service, and top-quality editing. On
future writing projects, you can work with the editor who worked with you on
your essays, or you can work with Andrea Smith, a professional resume writer
who recently affiliated with Accepted.com. She can write your resume and cover
letters for you. And like the editor who assisted you in gaining admission, she
can polish your resume and cover letters with a luster that may make the
difference in your job search.
Contact Accepted.com (resume@accepted.com or 310-815-9553) if you need help
with your resume and cover letters.
Tip of the Month
Transitions,
Transitions!
(Reminds me of a song from "Fiddler on the Roof" . . .)
Applicants writing essays face a traditional problem: how to fit disparate
experiences into a coherent whole.
You have a few options.
- Focus on one event or experience so that you minimize the problem.
- Unite your essay with a clear theme and effective transitions.
Themes were covered in the
April issue of Odds
‘N Ends, so in this issue we discuss transitions.
Transitions are words, phrases or sentences that tie paragraphs together
thematically. You can join them by comparing and contrasting, or connect
different topics or ideas in terms of theme, influence, setting, or chronology.
Here are a few suggestions and examples.
- Let’s say you want to switch from a discussion of your professional
experience to one of community service in an essay on leadership. You could
talk about common experiences in both types of leadership, or contrast the
difficulty of leading in a professional setting with that of leading in a
volunteer setting. If the preceding paragraph discussed professional
leadership, the new paragraph could begin like this: "The techniques I
used in leading my software development team proved equally effective in a
tougher volunteer setting."
- If you focused on certain qualities as a communicator participating in
college debating teams, you could transition to your professional sphere by
starting the new paragraph as follows, "Later, I used these same skills
as an senior consultant for ABC Consulting."
- If you are writing an essay about someone who influenced you, you can
describe that person’s attributes and then segue to how you have been
inspired by your mentor. For example, to start a paragraph following the
paragraph about a mentor, you could write, "Jack set an example of
initiative that inspired me to launch my own business and start a community
foundation." Then proceed to discuss your initiatives in business and
community service.
- You can also use a critical word or image from an earlier experience to
relate that experience to something you want to discuss in your new topic.
These are just some of the techniques you can use to develop a coherent essay
and make meaningful transitions in your writing.
Grad Admission News You Can Use
More Full-Time Profs Have Been Hired
The Chronicle of Higher Education recently cited a 1992 study in
reporting that more full-time professors are being hired. The study reveals that
most of the hiring takes place at research institutions and relates to
professional fields as opposed to the arts and sciences. The study also reports
that new female entrants comprised 41.8% of all full-time professors in 1992.
Similar strides were made in minority representation among faculty members.
All the news is not rosy for prospective profs, though. Fewer junior faculty
members are on tenured job tracks. They expressed less job satisfaction than
their senior counterparts and had less job security.
Law Admissions News You Can Use
Students Support Diversity
Diversity, or its absence, has received much attention in the halls of
academia. The Civil Rights Project at Harvard University has commissioned a
study to measure student attitudes towards diversity and its benefits, the Chronicle
of Higher Education reported.
The study, conducted at Harvard and Michigan law schools, asked students
about their interactions with students of other races and the effect of racial
and ethnic diversity. Eighty-one percent of the students supported their school’s
affirmative-action program. The remainder said these programs should be
de-emphasized or discontinued. Furthermore, 72% of Harvard’s students and 78%
of Michigan’s students said that discussions with students from different
backgrounds had significantly changed their views on legal issues.
The Civil Rights Project commissioned the study in the hope that the data
would convince courts of diversity’s value, the basis of the "compelling
interest" upon which Justice Powell based his landmark Bakke decision.
MBA Admissions News You Can Use
The Wild West of Commerce goes to B-School
In past issues, I have written about graduate degrees in e-commerce and the
explosion of entrepreneurship programs at business schools. Both trends reflect
the astounding growth of the Internet, the Wild West of commerce, and the New
Economy. Not surprisingly, these developments are influencing B-school curricula
in additional ways.
Business Week reports that a number of top B-schools are adding
E-commerce majors to their programs and two offer an E-commerce Master’s
degree. MIT’s Sloan School of Management will join Vanderbilt and the
University of Maryland in offering an E-commerce major. Carnegie Mellon and
Creighton University have previously announced programs that provide a Master’s
in E-commerce.
In recent years courses in Internet business have become common at most
business schools. Intense student interest in the Wild West of commerce and
powerful demand for Net-savvy managers from business drives these changes in
b-school curricula. Hi Ho Silver!
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Med Admissions News You Can Use
Secondary Essay Chat Transcripts
The most recent secondary chat (August 17, 1999) was an active, lively forum
with much give and take. Linda Abraham, assisted by Accepted.com’s editor
Cindy Tokumitsu, answered questions that had been sent to her ahead of time and
then opened the cyberfloor to questions from participants. Most of the
discussion focused on particular secondary essay questions and their unique
challenges.
If you are having difficulty with secondary essays, check out the
transcript.
You might discover that you had the same problem
as someone at the chat.
Number of Medical School Applicants Declines
The Journal of the American Medical Association reported in its September
1 issue that the number of applicants who applied for matriculation in September
1998 declined from 43,020 applicants for the class entering 1997 to 41,004 — a 4.7% drop.
The 1997 number was down 8.4% from those who applied to begin medical studies in
1996. JAMA also reported that early indications for the class entering
this September show that the trend is continuing in 1999.
Obviously the fewer MD wannabes applying, the better if you happen to be one
of them vying for a space in med school.
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