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June 2000 Volume 3, Issue 6
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Accepted.com Odds 'N Ends

We have decided to publish this newsletter as a service to our clients and others who register for it on our Web site. Accepted.com's Odds 'N Ends will bring you our tip of the month, admissions information for grad, law, MBA, and medical school applicants, and news about Accepted.com.

We also welcome contributions from readers. If you have comments, questions, or perhaps an article idea, please e-mail our editor. We cannot publish everything we receive, but we will try to respond to everyone. And as always, we appreciate feedback.

Index

What's New at Accepted.com
Essay Tip of the Month
Resume Tip of the Month
Grad Admission News You Can Use
Law Admission News You Can Use
MBA Admission News You Can Use
Medical Admission News You Can Use
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New This Month

We are inaugurating a new, regular feature in Odds 'N Ends: Resume Tip Of The Month.

Upcoming Chats

"Five Common Med School Application Mistakes to Avoid
Dr. Cynthia Lewis of Lewis Associates, a medical school admissions consultancy, returns to Accepted.com for a chat focused on what NOT to do when applying to medical school. Come to Accepted.com Chat on Tuesday June 20 at 7:00 PM Pacific Time (8:00 PM Mountain Time, 9:00 PM Central Time, 10:00 PM Eastern Time) and discover the secrets to doing it right.

The Definitive Chat on Medical School Admissions
Dr. Mark Goldstein, physician, Harvard Medical School faculty member, pre-med Advisor at MIT, and author of The Definitive Guide to Medical School Admissions, will be available to answer your questions on medical school admissions on Tuesday June 27 at 6:00 PM Pacific Time (7:00 PM Mountain Time; 8:00 PM Central Time, 9:00 PM Eastern Time) in our Chat Room. Mark your calendars, bring your questions, and get expert answers to your tough admissions questions.

If you would like to purchase Dr. Goldstein's book prior to the chat you can do so at Amazon.com.

Please note the different times of these two chats!!!

New Chat Transcripts Posted

The latest transcripts from the lively wait-list chat on April 12 and the Ace the AMCAS chat on May 2 are online. Unfortunately, the transcript from the previous medical school admissions chat with Dr. Cynthia Lewis was lost. She and I will put our notes together and post them shortly.

Presentations at CSUN and UCLA 

I presented "Ace the AMCAS Essay" to the pre-med societies at Cal State University at Northridge and UCLA in early May. Both presentations were well received.

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Accepted.com will soon add a resume section to the Web site. So if you have benefited from our valuable tips and news while applying to grad school, stay tuned. Accepted.com's astute articles will help you as you pursue that plum summer job or permanent position.

Essay Tip of the Month

Getting Started
Some of you will only write one essay and some of you will write a plethora of essays. But you will all start with a blank — screen or paper. How do you transform that blank into a coherent, articulate representation of you?

First ask yourself the following questions:

  1. Which experiences convinced you that you want to pursue your chosen field of study?
  2. What leadership positions have you held and what did you accomplish?
  3. What volunteer or internship positions have you had? Were these positions memorable or influential? If yes, how so?
  4. What kind of work experience do you have? Which accomplishments at work would you like to highlight?
  5. How did you choose your major? Is your major important? Has it influenced your graduate choices?
  6. Do you have any possible negatives to handle? How can you address them?
  7. What do you like to do for recreation?
  8. Have you traveled? Where?
  9. Have you participated in community service activities? Were these activities memorable or influential? If yes, how so?
  10. Have you overcome obstacles or difficulties in your personal life or in your academic or professional career?

Answering these questions should provide you with an inventory of material for the essays, probably much more than you can use, especially if you are one of the lucky ones who has to write only one essay.

For help choosing from the rich inventory you have developed, read next month's tip, "The Essential Laser."

Resume Tip of the Month

Is Your Resume ready for the Digital Age?
An ever-increasing number of employers are routinely scanning job applicants' resumes into computerized databases that automatically search for the keywords that demonstrate you have the skills they need. According to some estimates, there's at least a fifty-fifty chance your resume will be scanned by programs like Resumix and E-Cruiter. Whether you submit your resume through one of the online resume database services like monster.com or via "snail mail," you owe it to yourself to have a cyber-ready version of your resume.

What are the key differences between "e-resumes" and the traditional variety? From a design standpoint, your e-resume should be stripped of highlighting features like boldface, italics, tabs, and bullet points that might confuse the employers' scanners. Also, choose a typeface like Times Roman or Helvetica that the employers' scanning software can read easily.

If you're sending your e-resume as an e-mail attachment, your typeface choices are limited to ASCII text, still the safest "platform-neutral" character set. Make sure no line exceeds 60 character spaces; anything over that may create spillover lines that will make your e-resume look sloppy. Yes, even stripped-down e-resumes should look clean and well-formatted!

When it comes to the content of your resume, the key difference between electronic and traditional resumes is the use of keywords — the crucial terms the employers' databases are programmed to hunt for. If you're in the computer industry, your keywords will often be the technical buzzwords that define your niche — programming languages, computer platforms, general industry terms — but even years of work experience may be a searchable term. Some examples: "UNIX," "Java," "object-oriented," "Sybase."

But employers in every industry will have a set of keywords they're searching for (sometimes as few as 12; sometimes many more). For example, a firm seeking a venture capital attorney might program their scanning software to search for "mergers and acquisitions," "licensing transactions," "private equity," and "IPO." Needless to say, don't insert keywords unless they accurately reflect your skill set! To find out what keywords the employer you've targeted is looking for, study the job description you're applying for, classified help wanted ads, and industry sources such as professional associations and newsletters.

Finally, while the employer's resume-scanning software will find your keywords no matter where you put them in the resume, it's a good idea to combine them all in a Keyword Summary section at the top of the resume after your name, address, and contact info.

Happy (job) hunting!

By Paul Bodine, Accepted.com editor and member of the National Resume Writers Association and the Professional Resume Writers Association.

Grad Admission News You Can Use

Great Job Market for Geeks

In case you've been doing a Rip Van Winkle, it's a great job market for techies. Perks abound, along with very impressive salaries. For one of many articles covering this story, see the LA Times, " Geekdom is Awash in Perks".

Opportunities for Doctorates in Occupational Safety

The Chronicle of Higher Education reported that American medical schools and universities are not producing enough Ph.D.s and M.D.s trained in occupational safety and health. The Institute of Medicine, which is affiliated with the National Academy of Sciences, produced the report which expressed dismay at the low number of Ph.D.s - less than ten annually - trained in occupational health and medical residents specializing in occupational medicine, approximately 90 per year.

For the complete report and its findings, please visit
http://books.nap.edu/books/0309070260/html/R11.html#pagetop.

Law Admissions News You Can Use

WSJ Reports Record Salaries for New Associates

The dot-coms are changing the face of professional employment even at traditional law firms. Firms, particularly those with high-tech business, have had to jack up salaries for new legal associates in order to prevent their defection to dot-coms. According to The Wall Street Journal, in some big cities salaries for law school graduates have leaped 40% to $125,000 plus bonuses. With the bonus, a wet-behind-the-ears lawyer can earn more than $150,000.

MBA Admissions News You Can Use

Great Job Market for MBA's

The press is falling all over itself covering the outstanding job market and diverse options for talented, young graduates, in particular, MBAs. If you have any doubt as to the opportunities awaiting recent and current graduates, here is a small sampling of the latest articles:

Why Don't Women Pursue an MBA?

I have often wondered why the percentage of women applying to b-school has plateaued at around 30%, while the percentage applying to other professional and graduate programs far exceeds that. Apparently others in the business world wondered also and Catalyst, a professional women's organization, the University of Michigan, and the Center for the Education of Women surveyed over 1600 MBAs from twelve top b-schools to answer that question.

The good news: over 95% of men and women are satisfied with their business school experience. So why don't more women pursue MBAs? The study hints at some reasons: Female respondents complained of a lack of female role models (56 percent); incompatibility of careers in business with work/life balance (47 percent); lack of confidence in math skills (45 percent); and a lack of encouragement by employer (42 percent) as barriers they believe steer women away from pursuing an MBA.

The high satisfaction revealed in the study, the incredible opportunities available to MBAs, and the current labor shortage all compel B-schools and business to do more to attract women. The study also makes recommendations as to how schools can encourage more women to apply.

For further details, please visit
http://www.catalystwomen.org/home.html.

Med Admissions News You Can Use

Minority Pre-Med Summer Institute

The Robert Wood Johnson Foundation and Duke University have launched the Duke University Summer Biomedical Science Institute. The institute will hold its first session in June 2001 for college freshmen, sophomores, juniors and some post-graduates from underrepresented minorities. Boasting a web-based curriculum and a staff composed largely of minorities, the institute will offer classes in calculus, chemistry, biophysics, advanced biology, basic sciences, written and oral communications, and computer competency along with supervised patient contact and exam preparation.

The RWJ Foundation, in conjunction with AAMC, has funded similar programs at eight other colleges, including Baylor, Vanderbilt and Yale.

New Chair at MCP Hahnemann

Dr. Michael D. Ezekowitz, a renowned authority on atrial fibrillation and current head of Yale's Clinical Trials Office, will become Chair of Medicine at MCP Hahnemann. Administrators at MCP Hahnemann and Drexel University hailed the appointment as further evidence that Hahnemann is recovering from the 1998 bankruptcy filing of its predecessor, Allegheny University of the Health Sciences, and is reasserting its commitment to excellence in patient care and medical education.

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