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Tuck's Conference for International Educational Consultants
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"Invent first, and then embellish!"
So advised Samuel Johnson, the eighteenth-century English curmudgeon,
wit, and writer.
Now don't think for a minute that Dr. Johnson was advising writers like
you to make things up. He wasn't. He was recommending that writers, be
they a young minister who had sought his advice on writing a sermon or
you confronting the need to write personal statements and application
essays, first create a draft that you can work with and then edit it for
coherence, logic, writing mechanics, clarity and all the qualities that
contribute to good writing. Don't edit as you write that first draft.
Dr. Johnson's works are still being read almost 300 years after his
death. I doubt if your personal statement requires that kind of
longevity; it just needs to work with the rest of your application to
enhance the chances that you will be accepted to the program of your
choice. However, Dr. Johnson's advice is still applicable. Tell your
story. Get it down on paper. Then edit it until it shines.
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Scannability
An application resume is not the place to get fancy with
creative design elements, especially since many schools today
want applicants to submit their applications electronically.
Needless to say, you should avoid the use of art, graphics, or
photos. But even borders, boxes, tables, and sidebars are
distracting and unnecessary. The same goes for special
lettering, different colored type, raised or embossed type, even
italics and underlining.
In reality, the best design element of all is white space. If
the various sections of your resume and the data within those
sections are distributed effectively, the reader's eye will be
drawn naturally down the page to the information you wish to
highlight, without feeling overwhelmed or confused by data.
Again, this may well mean that you will have to delete bulleted
achievements or data points that you're quite proud of, in order
to create a resume that draws the reader in and sustains his or
her interest in the data that are really essential to your
application's message. They call it "scannability."
If possible, use margins as close as possible to one inch. Place
your strongest material in the two-inch visual space that begins
about 2 5/8 inches from the top of your resume. Try to include
your most impressive, impactful achievements and qualifications
in this "primetime" space where the reader's eyes will focus
first. This shouldn't be difficult, since this is the place
where your current position will normally appear.
An excellent way to discover the resume format preferred by the
school you're applying to: Look at the job-hunt resumes
maintained by your target school's career services office. If
you can't get a copy through your professional network, visit
the Yahoo! Group page of the MBA Resumebook Open Source
Initiative. This helpful site contains dozens of actual resumes
from the resume books of business schools like Wharton, Harvard,
Stanford, Columbia, Chicago, Yale, MIT, INSEAD, Northwestern
(Kellogg), and Virginia (Darden). Conforming your resume to the
school's preferred format may take extra time and effort, but
it's a nice way to signal that you're getting with the program.
--Paul Bodine is a Senior Editor at Accepted.com
Author of Great Application Essays for Business School
(forthcoming).
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