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5 Fatal Similarities between Flawed Essays and Baby Talk
During an all-too-short visit I enjoyed watching our 13-month-old
grandson, Avi, communicate -- something he does quite well considering
that he doesn't talk at all. I couldn't help but notice that he loves to
give speeches complete with gestures, hand motions, facial expression
and changes in volume and tone. He clearly thinks he is conversing
because he has the forms and seems to make the right noises.
Sometimes in reading essays, applicants make the right noises, including
"leadership" "communications skills," "teamwork," and "analytical
abilities." They may even embellish their essay with a rhetorical
flourish or two, but their essays are as empty and occasionally as
nonsensical as Avi's baby talk, and a lot less cute.
5 Fatal Flaws:
- Lack of substance - nothing demonstrates the qualities claimed.
- Failure to answer the question.
- Clich�d.
- Superficial.
- Lack of thought.
So if you want your essays to have more impact than Avi's speech, you
have a few options:
- Wait for next month's issue of Odds 'N Ends.
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Community Service on Your Resume
Yes, single-handedly negotiating the largest deal in your
company's history will give your resume extra luster. But
another powerful way to make it stand out is to ensure it
adequately represents your community or volunteer activities. In
fact, it's virtually impossible for such involvements to convey
anything but the most positive impression of you. List them in
reverse chronological order under an appropriate heading like
"Community Service," "Volunteer Work," "Public Service,"
"Charitable Commitments," or "Civic Involvement." If your
volunteer activities can be grouped into two or more themed
categories, by all means do so. For example, your work for
Make-a-Wish Foundation and Christian Children's Fund could be
grouped under the subheading "Helping Children" and your work
for the symphony and local theater under "Cultural
Volunteering."
Don't list your role or title as "volunteer." If you tutored,
say "Tutor"; if you coordinated a project, say "Coordinator." As
elsewhere in your resume, always be specific. Don't say "Tutored
children" when you really mean "Tutored 15 developmentally
disabled first-graders in art and music."
Highlighting community activities on your resume offers an
additional benefit if they advertise skills or experiences that
employers need. The best thing about raising $10K for cancer
research is benefiting a good cause, but it also shows you know
how to attract revenue -- an effective theme when your goal is
to run a mutual fund or launch a startup. Similarly, supervising
15 volunteers on a Habitat for Humanity site underscores your
leadership ability. You may be surprised how many skills your
community work has entailed -- training others, writing, public
speaking, project planning, etc.
Volunteer activities can also be used to work against
stereotypes. If you are a database administrator, your work
organizing a major charity bike-a-thon or speaking to corporate
audiences about arts education will squash the Dilbert "cubicle
drone" image. Community activities can help portray you as a
well-rounded, energetic, committed "doer" -- every employer's
ideal.By
Paul Bodine, Senior Editor at Accepted.com
Author of
Great Application Essays for Business School
(forthcoming).
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