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March 2007 Volume 10, Issue 3
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Accepted is hosting its first ever BBA chat. On Wednesday, March 14, 2007 at 2:00 PM PT/5:00 PM ET/10:00 PM GMT, Accepted will host a chat with special guest, Michele Thompson, Associate Director of Admissions, for applicants to Michigan's BBA program.

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Essay Tip
 

Marketing You

Your personal statement and application essays are frequently compared to marketing material. The analogy is a good one. Indeed, many admissions books talk about "Marketing Yourself to..."
Well let's see how marketers market. Do they use broad general statements so that they all sound alike? The bad ones do. The good ones write so that you see, feel, taste, or hear their product. Their copy transforms the product from an vague unknown into something alive and real. Not surprisingly, good copywriters provide an example you can learn from.

Here are 3 tips to help you market yourself during the application process:

  1. Don't make broad claims of desirable attributes; let the reader experience those attributes through your essay(s).
  2. Learn from your customers, the admissions committees.  They are telling you what they want to know in their questions; read the questions (along with their web sites, brochures, etc.).
  3. Let your personal statement embody the qualities you are trying to convey.  In other words, if you want to be thought of as a mature, articulate professional, write like one.

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Crafting A Resume To Highlight Your Competitiveness

If your resume portrays your accomplishments with vividness and clarity, it is already successful. However, for many industries, a healthy dose of competitiveness tactfully portrayed is an attractive quality - so if your resume highlights how you surpass your peers, all the better.

To portray this edge in your resume, first, keep the details of fairly obvious job responsibilities to a minimum. For example, for an investment banking analyst, that means foregoing the nitty-gritty of the financial analysis and modeling that virtually all analysts do. Or for a legal assistant, skip the list of research sources you are familiar with, impressive though it may be. These types of experiences only show you to be "on par" with your peers - competent, but not a standout.

Instead, present your resume points in the context of three factors:

Leadership. Look for times in your work experience when you presented a solution or sought a change that surpassed the scope of your defined role, and then worked to gain support and engage others in implementing it. When you write about this innovation in your resume, make sure to specify how it exceeded the requirements of your job.
Impact. Did you complete a tough assignment successfully? Congratulations, but that won't lift you out of the "competent" and into the "standout" category. Look for times in your work experience when you made an identifiable impact that went beyond expectations or requirements. In presenting such experiences, note the difference between the anticipated and the actual outcome, and quantify if possible.
Advancement. Have you assumed responsibilities that are usually shouldered by people with more experience or of a higher organizational rank? Or been promoted faster or higher than your company guidelines provide for? If so, make sure your resume reflects that fact explicitly.

Handling these three factors as suggested will make you stand out among your competitors, not just for your distinctiveness, but, frankly, for your power to succeed. Your reader will conclude, "A winner."

Cindy Tokumitsu
Senior Editor, Accepted.com
Member, Professional Association of Resume Writers

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