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May 2007 Volume 10, Issue 5
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Archives ISSN: 1526-2316
Published by Accepted.com Linda Abraham, Editor
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Accepted.com Odds 'N Ends


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Create a Better Sequel: How to Reapply Right to Business School shows you how to craft a compelling application and gain admission to top MBA programs -- the second time around.
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  • Improving your profile - the 4 Pillars of a Successful MBA Application
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6 Steps to a Remarkable Reapplication

OK, so you didn't get accepted anywhere. What should you do now?

Deal. Get over it. And consider what you're going to do next year. If you decide to reapply, you must assess what went wrong and resolve to improve it.

  1. Determine what you need to change. You definitely need to do something different, because your previous approach didn't work. Don't turn in the same essays.
  2. Analyze your qualifications versus your target schools' average stats and requirements. If you are applying with below average stats at more than two schools and are not from an under-represented minority, you're relying on miracles, not applying effectively. You either need to improve your profile or apply to less-competitive schools.
  3. Seek feedback. Some programs, particularly business and medical schools, give constructive feedback to re-applicants. If your school provides that service, take advantage of it ASAP. You want to hear the criticism early to give you as much time as possible to deal with any defects or weaknesses. Furthermore, some schools only provide a small window of time for feedback, so don't delay.
  4. Evaluate your application. Do your essays and letters of rec (if you have access to them) add to the reader's knowledge of you? What could you do to improve them? Consider using Accepted.com's application evaluation service to help you with this step. This service can be particularly valuable if your target schools don't provide feedback or it is very limited.
  5. Work on weaknesses. For example, if you applied to medical school with limited or no clinical experience, start volunteering at a local free clinic or hospital. If you applied to business school with a low GMAT, study for and retake the test.
  6. Prepare to highlight valuable recent experiences. When you reapply, you want to show that you are better than before. For instance, if you are pre-law and worked for the last six months at the DA's office, highlight that experience, related achievements, and the lessons learned in your resume and/or essay when you reapply. Show them you are "new and improved!"

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Starting Your Resume with a Professional Profile

A potential employer scans your resume, frowning. He just wants a quick impression before reading further. Why make him work to see your qualifications - and risk losing his attention - when you can convey this information swiftly and succinctly in a "Professional Profile" (or "Summary of Qualifications")?
A Professional Profile right after the contact information attracts the reader's eye immediately and summarizes your potential value to an organization. It whets the reader's appetite. It should be the length of a short to medium paragraph, in bullet form, and contain the following:

  • Key professional accomplishments, quantified if possible, but cast in a wider context than a specific position (see item #1 below). Select those most meaningful to your target audience.
  • Required or helpful qualifications, such as specialized degrees, certifications, and licenses.
  • Optional: statements that reflect your personal strengths, e.g., "Completed part-time MBA in 3.5 years, earning 3.8 GPA while working approximately 60 hours per week and gaining 2 promotions." Through plain facts, this sentence shows your focus, time management, capacity for hard work, and ability to thrive under pressure.

The Professional Profile must be set apart graphically from the rest of the resume. For more conservative resumes, placing a simple rule around it works well. For more creative resumes, shading the box or using a more decorative rule are options. This graphic device draws the reader's eye to that section first.

You may have two concerns:

  1. Won't the content be redundant of the resume? Yes, but minimally. You can note an accomplishment within a broader context, such as "Consistently exceed sales targets: Brought in 10 new $100K clients in 6 months, doubling previous company record," and then, when discussing this accomplishment later, mention how you did it without repeating that you "consistently exceed sales targets."
  2. Shouldn't the statement of objective come first? No. This section replaces a statement of objective. The objective statement tells the reader what you want for yourself. The point of the resume is to enthuse the reader about what you can do for her and her company.

Cindy Tokumitsu, Senior Editor, Accepted.com
Member, Professional Association of Resume Writers

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