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Consider Kellogg
Hear all about Kellogg's famed general management program from Beth Flye, Director of Admissions on Wednesday, September 12, 2007 at 10:00 AM PT/1:00 PM ET/5:00 PM GMT.

Wondering about Wharton

Join Thomas Caleel, Director of Admissions and Financial Aid, and other Wharton adcom members on Thursday, Sept. 20, 2007 at 10:00 AM PT/ 1:00 PM ET/ 6:00 GMT to discuss this top ranked program.

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Essay Tip
Tying the Past to the Future
A participant in LAMP asked me, “I understand the key to the essay is to link my past to my future and show how School X fits into the picture. However, talking about the future, in general, has no basis, and talking about School X does not make me unique.”

These are great observations about the challenges facing applicants writing statements of purpose, MBA goals essays, and to a slightly lesser extent, law and medical school personal statements. You need to talk about the future and keep it real. You also need to distinguish yourself from your competition and introduce yourself as a human being and individual to the admissions committee while discussing your reasons for wanting to attend School X. How can you handle these challenges?
Talking about the future should have a basis because your past experience should shape and inform your future goal. If you say you want to go into international business, ADR, or primary care medicine, then you better have international experience, dispute resolution know-how, or primary care exposure. If your goal has no basis, it is pie in the sky and won't fly. (pun intended.) Also, international business, just for example, is very broad. For MBA’s in particular, specific goals are much better, and they also help you in the other fields provided they are anchored in your past. Specificity differentiates and reveals foresight and research. Use it to your advantage.

Talking superficially about School X or spitting back School X’s marketing material and mantras does you no good. But if you can write about specific classes or seminars with particular professors whose research or specialization is of interest to you because they will help you achieve your career aspirations, then you have a winner. Show not that you have read their brochure, but that you have researched their program and given serious thought to how it will help you attain your professional dreams.  In so doing, you will also demonstrate that you belong at School X.
Resume Tip
How to Select and Present Qualitative Achievements in Your Résumé

The first rule of resume writing is to quantify your achievements. However, numbers don't tell the whole picture, no matter what your line of work. Prospective employers, even numbers- and technology-focused ones such as investment banks and engineering firms, need to know that you can interact productively with others. Thus, it is important to "mine" your experience for concrete, specific achievements that demonstrate your strength in teamwork, interpersonal skills, and communication.

How do you identify and present such achievements? Start by looking in the following three areas for achievements that you can encapsulate in bullet form.
  1.  Feedback from peers and superiors. Try to use an actual quote - otherwise it will be too general. Capture the main phrase in a short bullet:
    • Although youngest on team by five years, praised by lab director as "most mature team player."
    • Described by manager to client's CIO as "most effective communicator with technical staff" among firm's strategy consultants.
  2. Handling conflicts. Have you helped warring parties come to terms?
    • Resolved conflict between senior editor and production manager over missed deadlines by leading focused discussions, resulting in new deadline-setting process and all subsequent deadlines being met.
  3. Bringing good people onto the team or convincing them to stay. Employers know that this type of achievement has a tremendous impact on an organization.
    • Convinced key accountant to remain with organization through peak period when he was recruited aggressively by competing practice.
    • Referred two interns, who have since joined firm and earned promotions within a year.
Let these suggestions spark your imagination as you re-examine your "people experience" for qualitative successes.

Cindy Tokumitsu
Senior Editor, Accepted.com
Member, Professional Association of Résumé Writers
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