Her editing was great, that was the area I needed the most help with and her edits and suggestions helped me perfect my statement. I had a jumble of words on paper, and she helped me turn it into something I felt confident in submitting.
Carol helped me more than I thought she would. I really appreciate her help. She helped me get admitted to the program.
I really enjoyed working with my consultant [Carol Drummer] and think she did a great job! As a result of this I have been accepted at Carnegie Mellon University (Master in Information Systems Management - BI and Analytics at Heinz College).
Hope this information helps. Once again, I am very convinced my consultant did help me in forming a convincing story.
Dear Ms. Abraham,
I wanted to take the opportunity to thank Carol for her assistance. Last year, I applied to 6 psychology PhD programs and received no interviews. I came across accepted.com, and decided to investigate. Frankly, I was skeptical. I have multiple degrees and I had never before needed help with my personal statement. I was also reluctant to spend the money - it seemed like a lot. Nevertheless, I decided to plunge forward with accepted.com. I thought of it as an investment - I was spending hundreds of dollars to apply to graduate school, so this seemed like a ridiculous place to draw a financial line. Words cannot express how thankful I am that I made that decision. This year, I applied to 6 PsyD programs and 1 PhD program. I have had 5 PsyD interviews and my PhD interview is next month. I have been offered admittance to two PsyD programs, one of which is one of my very top choices. I am waiting to hear from my other top PsyD choice, with the PhD program in the mix. I have not received decisions from the other schools, but I do not care because my other choices are the best of the best. The difference between last year's and this year's results is simply accepted.com and, particularly, Carol. Her help and guidance with my SOP can not be overestimated. At every school, at least one interviewer has mentioned the strength of my SOP. I am exactly the same candidate I was last year, but my dream schools are interested in me now. I am absolutely over the moon. This was, without a doubt, the best money I could have spent. I am so glad I found accepted.com, and I am so glad that you put me in touch with Carol. Thank you both for EVERYTHING.
Carol, no matter the admission results, I would like to say that I'm totally satisfied with the whole work we did. I know it will be tough, but I know that I put my best in the whole process. I also would like to thank you for all the support and attention you gave to me. I'm sorry if I bored you in some moments asking too much. You are incredible! Thank you so much for everything, I'm really grateful!
Best Regards, Andre
