The verdict is in: I'm in!
I was truly blessed to have you as an essay coach. Actually, you were more than an essay coach; you were a confidence builder. You helped me craft a very consistent theme for my application and build an irrefutable case for admission. For this, I will be forever grateful.
-- Accepted to U Penn MS program.
Soon after I started thinking about business school a few years back I came across accepted.com. After reading a few articles on the site, I became convinced that I must come back to the site when I am ready to apply. When I got serious about applying this year, I again found accepted.com standing out among all the other companies. I never really thought such companies would do anything more than give some canned answers and run spell checkers on my essay. But soon after I began working with Cindy Tokumitsu I realized that was not going to be the case here. I will always remember Cindy’s initial review of my essays where she was able to see their strength right away. She provided valuable advice as I worked through the many essays for the three schools I initially applied. Although I got rejected from my first choice, I got accepted into two other T20 schools from the ‘U.S. News’s 2015 Ranking Of The Top EMBA Programs’.
It did not end there; Cindy actually encouraged me to apply to two other schools which I never thought would be within my reach. But I took her advice and got accepted into two M7 schools.
So Cindy’s advice not only help me sharpen my story, but she also saw the potential I had and gave valuable advice that has changed the trajectory of my career forever. I found her to be a true professional - courteous, accommodating, engaging and extremely skilled at what she does. As for the company itself, I found the pricing structure very affordable compared to the expected ROI from one of the top MBA programs in the world.
