The verdict is in: I'm in!
I was truly blessed to have you as an essay coach. Actually, you were more than an essay coach; you were a confidence builder. You helped me craft a very consistent theme for my application and build an irrefutable case for admission. For this, I will be forever grateful.
-- Accepted to U Penn MS program.
I really liked the edits, they made the essay sound more engaging.
I wanted to say a big thank you for all of your help with the drafts of the essays over the past few months, I am glad that I decided to reach out to Accepted for help and got you as a consultant. I just submitted the applications so they are done, finally, after almost four months of working on them. I was eager to get them off, ha! :)