I received an offer of admission two weeks ago. I wanted to let you know that your counsel was quite helpful and informative as I approached the process; I felt more informed as to my strengths and weaknesses, particularly from the perspective of the ADCOM, reflected accordingly, and attempted to address thoughtfully and honestly via my essays and interview. I wanted to let you know that I appreciate your counsel and thank you for your valuable insight.
--Accepted to NYU Stern EMBA
I've got some updates about my application to share with you.
I received decisions from all the schools I applied. I have been accepted by Carnegie Mellon, University of Washington in Seattle and Boston University. [Also got 2 partial and one full scholarship]
And, I wanted to express my special thanks to you for all your help. You are an excellent consultant! It was a great experience working with you.
I just received the great news that I have been awarded a [significant] scholarship. I don't think it would have been possible without your edits (Judy) and interview prep by you: Natalie.
You two have been the best support system that I could have asked for in this process which is often full of ups and downs. Thank you so much for being there.
--Accepted to Darden