You want to present a compelling essay that puts you ahead of the applicant pack at your target MBA program. But how can you do so – without spending tons of time writing?
We are providing sample essays to stimulate your creative juices and provide varied examples of essay excellence. As you read them, note the individuality that flows from each one. Also observe the effective use of a clear theme, an engaging opening, and a conclusion that ties up each essay. When you finish reading them, you will feel a tiny bit like you met someone, maybe even someone you would like to meet again. That’s the feeling that can cause admissions committee readers to think “Accept”:
Now for the tough questions: Can you bring your writing to this level? Can your roommate, cousin in an MBA program, or Aunt Millie help you do so?
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"Sheila Bender ... did a great job ... Rather than just "wordsmithing", she worked closely with me to develop a compelling story, but allowed me to maintain my voice.
My stats are less than stellar, so I know that my essays made the difference. I was accepted by my first choice, Berkeley."
