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We bet you're thinking, "Well they sound good, but what do their clients say?" Do they think Accepted.com's editors improved their essays and their chances of acceptance?

Accepted.com's clients are talking about the unique services provided by our editing and consulting team! To read more about Accepted.com's experienced professional editors, please select from the links below. We encourage you to share your thoughts and always welcome your comments!

Cydney Foote
"Everything is a blur since I submitted those residency applications in November that you helped to polish into masterpieces! As it turns out, I matched at ... my first choice overall, so I am very happy. Thanks again for all your hard work - I really couldn't have done it without you. "


Cydney Foote
Like always, I am tremendously impressed by your [editing] skills and how you convey qualities in such a concise and eloquent way. Above all, the way you guide, encourage throughout each process of application. Moreover, I am fascinated by your abilities to distill information and produce amazing results.


Sheila Bender
I really like what you did with my essay. You're a great editor!


Cydney Foote
I am obviously quite impressed with your work. I have gotten over 20 interviews so far.


Cydney Foote
Cydney was EXCELLENT at molding my statement to capture exactly what I was trying to say. I really like the Med School Essay Package. The outline was really helpful – it allowed me to target the information that was needed for my personal statement instead of the fluff. Cydney was WONDERFUL with turnarounds. I was very happy with her understanding of my time constraints. She provided criticism where needed, in a respectful way, and she knew what information to use to make me shine in my personal statement. I think I’ll use the services again for the residency process.


Cydney Foote
Hi Cydney, I do not have words to thank you, I am greatful for your remarkable ability and above all your tremendous capacity to make my essay work AND I AM TRULY DELIGHTED AND SATISFIED. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH. I will keep you posted.


Cydney Foote
Nice to hear from you again! I apologize for not updating you on how the process went for me, but I've got some great news! I had gotten interviews at nearly every school I applied to, including Harvard, Hopkins, Yale, Columbia, WashU, and Michigan. I was accepted to Hopkins, Michigan, UChicago, UPittsburgh, and Wayne State, with Michigan and Chicago giving me full or near-full tuition scholarships. However, I've decided to attend Hopkins next fall. I really think the essay added flavor to an otherwise solid application, and I don't doubt that the essay certainly opened some doors. Thank you so much for working with me last summer, I ended up being real happy with the end result and I don't think I would be at the same place today without your help. So out of 20 secondaries, I recieved 18 interviews, I went to 11, accepted to 5, waitlisted to 4, and rejected post-interview to 2.


Cydney Foote
From the bottom of my heart, thank you for your help with my essay. I am remiss in not having emailed you back, but I assure you I have been singing your praises constantly over an amazing edit of my personal statement. My mom said she cried when she read it and I admit I was pretty moved by the way it came together too. Thank you for bringing out the best version of my story.


Cydney Foote
I have received a bunch of acceptances: University of West Virginia, UMDNJ: New Jersey Medical School, Michigan State University, Temple University, and Drexel University. I'm also on the high priority alternate lists at UMDNJ: Robert Wood Johnson, and Wake Forest. Accepted.com's name certainly rings true; I remain convinced that your help really made a difference in terms of the the number of acceptances and interviews I received. One of my interviewers at West Virginia even congratulated me on a "very impressive personal statement." I have recommended accepted.com to about five of my friends that are applying to medical school, and would recommend it to anyone else that is serious about getting the most acceptances possible out of their application.


Cindy Tokumitsu
Thank you again for your help with my essays.  Several of my interviewers commented on how polished they were and I think they really helped to off-set my lower score in the MCAT verbal.  I have been recommending you to others! I hope all is well! --Accepted to Penn State, SUNY Downstate, SUNY Upstate, Stonybrook, George Washington University and NYU.


Cydney Foote
WOW - this is great! I really feel it’s developed into exactly what I want to portray about myself. With each draft, I really feel what I wanted to come across in my essay has definitely come through! Thanks so much for your time and patience.


Joan Davis
Thank you so much for your prompt service. I was extremely impressed with the service your company provided in helping me with my personal statements...Joan Davis helped me so much.

Again, thank you much for your assistance.


Cydney Foote
I will certainly spread the word about accepted.com. I have nothing but high praises for your fine editor, Cydney. She is excellent at her craft! She is incredibly knowledgeable, insightful, and prompt. And it is because of this that I am hoping I could work with her for my secondaries.


Cydney Foote

1) On a macro (content) level, how would you rate your editor`s input?

Absolutely amazing. I was having a hard time figuring out what experiences would sell me best. Plus, they all sounded good as separate anecdotes, but I had no idea how to weave all of them together in a coherent story. My final challenge was my prose--I tend to write in a lawyer`s cut and dry style, whereas the statement needs to be more narrative and engaging. Cydney helped me address all those problems and more, by talking to me over the phone to flesh out my questionnaire and by creating a very clear outline to follow.

2) On a micro level, how would you rate your editor`s editing?

Unbelievable. Within an hour, she would have a 10000 word draft I did pared down to 6000 characters, without losing an ounce of the emotion I was trying to convey.

3) How would you rate Accepted.com`s service? Did your editor keep to our two-business-day turnaround commitment?

Good lord yes. Sometimes even less than two days. She could get things back to me within hours.

4) How would you rate your editor on presenting criticism constructively? Was he or she supportive while helping you present yourself in the best possible light?

Absolutely. I had several "difficult" conversations with her--e.g. advice my dean or others had given me that didn`t seem to jive with her advice. But each time, she clearly and concisely articulated her rational, logical viewpoint. Every time, it made perfect sense. The few times where I was dead set on doing something a particular way, she made it work without compromising the writing. She was, simply put, phenomenal.

5) What is the one thing Accepted.com or your editor should do to really improve the quality of our service?

Honestly? I really don`t think you can. I`d say the prices are a bit high for poor students, but then again, every dollar is absolutely worth it. I think you guys could market yourselves better--you guys provide a really valuable service, and more people need to be aware of it. Because of Cydney`s quick turnaround time, I`m as early as I could be in this application cycle. That`s a HUGE advantage, and something prospective clients need to be aware of. I guess I`d also tell your clients that the outline may not make sense at first, but to have faith. When Cydney first gave me my outline, I felt like she was emphasizing experiences (law school) that I didn`t want to emphasize. She told me to have faith in the process, so I did--and it turned out brilliantly, just as she assured me. Since most people coming to you are not strong writers, I think you have to assure them that if they keep the faith in the process, they will not be disappointed. I hope that makes sense.

6) On a scale of 1-10, where 10 is Most Likely and 1is Never in a Million Years, how likely are you to recommend Accepted.com to friends and colleagues?

Are you kidding? Is this a real question? A 10, most definitely. I came back to Cydney after my statement for help with my postgrad experiences, and I`ll be back for secondaries too.

Cydney is like this godsend from Canada that appeared out of nowhere, just when I was getting so frustrated with my applications because of the writing. Because of her, I was able to not only finish my primary but also to devote time to another huge priority... I can`t thank her enough.



Sonia Michaels
Sonia, I have been busy with interviews and secondaries, I wanted to thank you earlier! I have received nothing but praise about my personal statement on both of the interviews I have had so far. They commented that they were relieved that they were not reading yet another “story” or experience that was trying to wrap all of the experiences together. The concise and ordered, no B.S., method was much preferred. Thank you again for all of the help.


Cydney Foote
Thank you so much for all of your help, and your amazingly fast turnaround. I feel that my application will be immeasurably stronger thanks to your help. I will definitely recommend you and accepted.com to all of my friends, and will consider using you guys again for secondary applications. You are the greatest.


Cydney Foote
I will rank my editor (Cydney Foote) number 10 [on a scale of 1-10 where 10 is "Outstanding") . Input 10. editing 10. fast within 2 days, yes. Construction, composition is excellent. The way she helps me to express my idea, the way she asked [me to be] clearer in my essay.

I will recommend your site to anyone who [is] looking for editor.


Cydney Foote
I love my statement! You really have a gift for allowing someone to express themselves accurately!


Cydney Foote
Wow, you did a fantastic job on this Columbia essay! I feel very confident about how it fits in so nicely with the other essays in this application and with the personal statement!"


Cydney Foote
Thank you for all your help. The essay is amazing and I know it would not be at the level that it is without your help. Have a wonderful summer and once again Thank you.


Paul Bodine
Paul,
Thanks again for all your help and patience with my silly stories. I appreciated how you told me some things worked and did not work. It really helped me figure out where to go with the essays. Well, I think this may be the last time you hear from me until I know about where this journey takes me. Many thanks to you and the editors at accepted.com your help gave me the confidence to keep going in this process. All the best to you!


Cindy Tokumitsu
Thank you so much for your help on my essays. I've already [early November] received an acceptance from University of Virginia. I received a compliment from one of my interviewers about my personal essay. The help you have given me has definitely made a difference…Thanks again!


Cydney Foote
I was very skeptical about the whole accepted.com package. My Mom and Dad were wise enough to know that with my limited time I would need help. They persuaded me to buy the support. I do not know how I could have gotten my application done on time without Cydney Foote. It is amazing how quickly and efficiently she works. I was humbled to see how messy my essay was and how much time I had spent on my other essay (weeks) only to discard it. It did not describe me at all. I had been advised not to use the cliche' of I have always wanted to go to medical school. Cydney gave me the courage to be myself in the essay and say things like that in a way that did not come across as boring. I will continue to use the program and I will recommend it to others.


Cindy Tokumitsu
How are you? It has been a while since I have been in touch, but that has been for a good reason. Medical school interviews have been keeping me very busy and I wanted to let you know of my progress, as I`ve finished the process.

I was offered 16 interviews and completed 12 of them - 9 were at top 25 schools. I`ve been offered seats at Vanderbilt, UNC, and Georgetown. I`ll wait until May 15 to make a final decision, after all post-interview decisions arrive!

Thanks for your help. You don`t know how much I appreciate your input and suggestions!



Paul Bodine
I have had 10 (residency) interviews and have 2-3 more. That is just enough to be sure to get in somewhere.

For your information - one program director said that my personal statement was best he had ever read. Thanks.


Cydney Foote
I am very HAPPY that I found you guys to help me out with my essay. Cydney was great. Each of my interviewers were very impressed with my essay. Again, thanks for your service. Hopefully, in a couple of years you will hear from me again when it is time for me to apply for my residency. (Accepted to 3 medical schools)


Cydney Foote
I just wanted to let you know that I was accepted at Wayne State University-School of Medicine, Michigan State University-College of Osteopathic Medicine (DO), and Michigan State University-College of Human Medicine (MD). I had help on my AMCAS personal statement from Linda Abraham at an AMSA conference and from the examples on the accepted.com website. I also received help from Cyd (editor) on my secondary for MSU-CHM. She did a wonderful job!


Cydney Foote
...work of art is all that I can say, thank you very much for a great job [editing residency essay]. It truly shows how professional you are.


Cindy Tokumitsu
The initial interview allowed me to probe my motivations and reasons for choosing to pursue a medical eduction. The outline was very helpful and provided a very detailed road map for my writing …

Cindy was a great asset and worked with me over the course of seven drafts before I cranked out a final essay. All of my drafts were returned within two days and were accompanied by comments and suggestions.



Cindy Tokumitsu
I have been meaning to write a little note to express my thanks and appreciation. I was very pleased with the 2 essays that you helped me with for my med school application. You were able to find the right words to capture my feelings and my "story". I also wanted to let you know that our hard work paid off. Within a day of dropping off my completed secondary application I was called for an interview. Then within 2 weeks of my interview I was accepted at Wright State University . I had applied early decision so it was my first choice. I ... am anxiously awaiting the first day of class. I'm not sure I could have done it without your help.


Cindy Tokumitsu
I've been thinking about this whole crazy process [after being accepted to 3 medical schools] and I know that I wouldn't have had a prayer if it weren't for your substantial help. They say the essays are one of the most important aspects of the application, especially for someone like me whose numbers are a little below average. So I can't express my appreciation to you enough. You have helped me immeasurably... ...you greatly de-stressed an important part of this process that was making me quite anxious. I felt much more confident in my essays after working with you.


Paul Bodine
I wanted to thank you for the help with my essay [for residency program]. I love it. I am going to submit it this week... Thanks again.


Paul Bodine
Paul was great. I'm an experienced writer with a degree in journalism, but I was really struggling with presenting information about myself in a Personal Statement. I was amazed when I received my outline how he organized all my information in such a great format.


Paul Bodine
I looked over the draft, IT LOOKS AMAZING, you should get a Pulitzer prize!!! for your amazing ability to integrate ideas and themes.


Paul Bodine
I've been meaning to get back to you and Accepted.com. John matched for his residency at his first choice program for neurology, and I matched in family practice at one of my top choices in California. We are both grateful for your comments, remarks, and editing suggestions for our essays. I strongly believe that your help gave my essay the direction and focus I was looking for, and played an important role in making my application more competitive.

John obtained interviews at many of the top neurology programs on the West Coast; his final personal statement clearly reflected his achievements and goals -- and was enjoyable to read! Thank you again for your assistance Paul.

We both whole-heartedly recommend your service highly to others, and will continue to mention your service to our friends in the application process.


Paul Bodine
...I interviewed with U of Vermont in late March and just found out Monday that I've been accepted! ... I think it will be a perfect place (other than cost) for my medical training.

Thanks again for helping me with my essay... it really made a difference.

I will recommend you guys to anyone applying to grad schools.


Paul Bodine
I just wanted to write and thank you for all your assistance. Certainly your help has made my personal statement [for residency] much stronger. Not only that, but I feel a little bit more confident about my application and chances overall...

Thanks to you and a little luck, I think I'll do pretty well.


Paul Bodine
Your outline is absolutely outstanding!!! I must tell you I was initially somewhat hesitant to spend $300 to get assistance with my personal statement, but your outline alone is worth every cent. Thanks a lot.


Linda Abraham
To answer your question, YES! I have been accepted into five medical schools -- Temple, SUNY-Buffalo, BU, Penn State, and U of Alabama at Birmingham. I have decided to attend the Medical Scientist Training Program I have received a full tuition waiver and a stipend. I can't tell you how pleased I am. Many interviewers commented about the quality of my essay, which I owe you a great deal of gratitude for.


Paul Bodine
Great news! I got 7 interviews, 2 acceptances, and 1 wait list so far. I think the AMCAS essay you helped me write was the cause of a lot of the success. Thanks for all of your help!


Linda Abraham
Thanks to your help my essay was concise and at least 1000 times more interesting to read than the one I wrote for the [previous year's] admissions. You provide a great service, thanks again!


Linda Abraham
Thank you for sending the revisions. I love it! It reads better, but is still very much my own writing. I will be certain to contact you in the future if I need help on my secondary application essays.


Linda Abraham
Linda Abraham improved my essay's organization, clarity, flow, and grammar in addition to providing some original thoughts. She improved my chances of acceptance to medical school.


Sonia Michaels
Thank you so much for your help. The essay looks great. The changes you made really pulled the whole thing together nicely. It flows and reads much better now. And thank you for keeping the time as low as possible. I'll definitely send all my friends applying your way!! Thanks again.


Linda Abraham
I came to Mrs. Abraham to edit my personal statement for medical school. I've found that Mrs. Abraham was a tremendous help in not only enabling me to recognize my grammatical flaws, but more importantly she helped me to present my thoughts in a much clearer manner. I would recommend her not only to non-native Americans like myself, but also to native Americans so that they too can gain valuable 'enlightenment' about their writing skills.


Paul Bodine
I just wanted to let you and Paul Bodine know about the progress of my applications. I was accepted to Rush Medical School and Midwestern University (DO school). Also wait listed at Univ. of Texas, and I still have a few more interviews coming up, so I haven't made a final decision. I just wanted to say thank you to both you and Paul for all of your help with my essay. I am not sure I mentioned it in the past, but this was my 5th time applying...


Linda Abraham
I would like to thank you for your help. Currently, I have been invited to fourteen interviews from schools which include UCLA, UCSD, UCI, Baylor, Vanderbilt, University of Pittsburgh, University of Texas Southwestern, Tulane, and George Washington Schools of Medicine. Throughout these interviews, I was complimented on my personal statement and supplementary essays, which you so patiently helped me edit. I have also been accepted to two of the above schools. Considering it's only October 22, I couldn't be happier with my progress.


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